Reviews for My Entity
Broken-Lithium chapter 24 . 5/8/2010
I felt like crying in this chapter. I feel so bad for Gavril. Just a small boy... :'(
Broken-Lithium chapter 23 . 5/8/2010
Poor, poor Ashe. Why did Gav have to be silent? He really would have helped.
Broken-Lithium chapter 22 . 5/7/2010
Ashe really loves him.
Broken-Lithium chapter 20 . 5/7/2010
Poor heartbroken lil Ashe...
Broken-Lithium chapter 19 . 5/7/2010
Nice poetry
Broken-Lithium chapter 18 . 5/7/2010
Aw, poor Ashe. She loves him and she knows Gav's right about her. I hope they end up happy together.
Broken-Lithium chapter 17 . 5/7/2010
Wow, I really enjoyed this chapter. Gav really cares for Ashe. :)
Broken-Lithium chapter 15 . 5/7/2010
Okay, Gav is about the coolest person ever.
Broken-Lithium chapter 14 . 5/7/2010
OMG. No way. I like this.
Broken-Lithium chapter 13 . 5/7/2010
Wow, your writing is fantastic. I feel so bad for Gav!

And if Gav had his own body, they could totally be together. They trust each other and have a very close, intimate (correct me if this is wrong word choice) relationship. But because Ashe has a fear of commitment, maybe they'd never be.

Who knows?

Oh thats right. You.
Broken-Lithium chapter 9 . 4/28/2010
LOVE Ashe. She is evil, but in a FTW way.

Broken-Lithium chapter 8 . 4/28/2010
Totally love Gavril.

Broken-Lithium chapter 7 . 4/26/2010
She totally PWNed people in this chapter. LOVE IT!

Broken-Lithium chapter 6 . 4/26/2010
Hm, very good prospect with the alien thing...

I like this still as much as I have in all previous chapters. This is remarkable work here, seeing as you are keeping your character realistic and when events happen, they are very thought out and not over-dramatic.

Broken-Lithium chapter 4 . 4/25/2010
Ash is a very relate-able character and this seems like a real-life situation teens can get into. Still liking this a whole lot.

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