Reviews for My Entity
CassandraStacy chapter 18 . 7/17/2009
It's really hard to cover brown eyes up with colored contacts. Trust me, I've tried. But I only look weird. Heh! I think that there is def. something important about the fact that she wears colored contacts. In fact, I think that maybe Hot Guy uses eyes to hypnotize people. But he can't hypnotize her because she wears contacts. But that's just my guess!

CassandraStacy chapter 17 . 7/17/2009
Three days in a row, eh? heh! Gav is super sweet!

Jaden Ink chapter 25 . 7/17/2009

hot guy is bad guy and want's to see her eyes so badly so that he can tell if gav is in there.. SHIT SHIT SHIT!
Jaden Ink chapter 24 . 7/17/2009
holy shizz...
CassandraStacy chapter 16 . 7/17/2009
I want to know what's up with Hot Guy. (Nigel, snort.) I believe that Gav's methods would probably work better too . . .

CassandraStacy chapter 15 . 7/17/2009
Heh! Tutored her through the test. That's cute.

CassandraStacy chapter 14 . 7/17/2009
I like this chapter. I don't know if you plan on making religion a focus in this story. But either way, I like it!

CassandraStacy chapter 13 . 7/17/2009
It's sad that she has such a poor outlook on marriage. The first poem was beautiful. But so sad too. Her fear of sex is . . . funny. Heh! A cucumber? Really? You won't catch me doing THAT anytime soon!

CassandraStacy chapter 12 . 7/17/2009
This is simply hilarious! 7 reasons . . . . L O V E. I'm also glad to know the backstory behind the reason Gav is in her head.

CassandraStacy chapter 11 . 7/17/2009
Hilarious chapter! I loved the haiku at the end.

Jaden Ink chapter 17 . 7/17/2009
Jaden Ink chapter 11 . 7/17/2009
hahahaha gav was right... hot guy is a tool
Jaden Ink chapter 9 . 7/17/2009
hahahaha sucker...
Jaden Ink chapter 8 . 7/17/2009
Shut up.

Not this time. You will cease speaking with this “Hot Guy” immediately.

Oh yeah? And why should I?

I don’t like him.

i love how bossy the gavaril is...
Jaden Ink chapter 7 . 7/17/2009
Do you think he would look good on a leash?”

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