Reviews for Asphyxiated
Site-3 chapter 2 . 4/23/2010
MORE NOW! "Or I'll..I' Kill the kitties? Wait. YEAH! I'll kill ALL the cute lilpuppys and kitties in the WORLD!"

So the kitties.

This has been a public service announcement by a crazy Italian boy. BEWARE!Rofl P
That's to be Expected chapter 5 . 1/14/2009
Vynn is so cute! _

mgirls chapter 5 . 11/9/2008
Wow, this is a really good story. You're an awesome writer.
DarkSacrifice chapter 5 . 7/24/2008
helow helow dark here! im on aarin tooXD and i've read your story there! but i thought you were further with the story on this werentXD but i hope you will update soon cause i love your story! i like the way you write and i love alaric
Nenyeh chapter 4 . 6/23/2008
Still got my attention and this is at ten past 3 in the morning so that deserves some praise XD.

Loved the imagery at the end._
Nenyeh chapter 2 . 6/23/2008
Another good read Really enjoying this story so I'll add it to my favs.
Nenyeh chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
Love the beginning of this, really caught my attention and it was well written. Great story so far.
SerialXLain chapter 5 . 6/11/2008
Vyn just keeps running into the most charming men, doesn't he? o.o Poor little lad.

(I wish I could have a dungeon like Alaric, though... :sigh: )
SerialXLain chapter 4 . 6/11/2008
I like Kam. :o

Cliffy. Good thing I put off reading this forever. Bwahaha.
hazza1508 chapter 5 . 6/11/2008
really like this story. Please update asap
Limited Edition chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
Quite an intriguing story there!

The italics are overused. A bit annoying, since there is no need for emphasis on so many words. There is also no need for paragraph breaks so often.

I'm thinking that if this creator has such a talent, he would surely be more cherished for it than despised, and would also find more patronage from one of these lords as a mecenator?

Ah well, good job.
CaFFy chapter 4 . 4/24/2008
Update soon?
CaFFy chapter 3 . 4/24/2008
o.O;; Vynn gets punishment. -cackle-
boyzarecrazy24 chapter 3 . 9/22/2007
YAY! fantasic story! great plot, brilliant characters, amazing supported history! i luv it! :P ur writing is to be admired, truely 10/10

SerialXLain chapter 3 . 8/31/2007
:O I like Kersten.

I'll venture into your forbidden areas, baby. ;D

*coughcough* Just kidding... But I'm curious about what'll happen to Vynn when he does. :O
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