Reviews for Welcome To The Universe |
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![]() ![]() ![]() ZOMG. That was awesome :D It covered (as far as I know..) most of the major problems in the world. I only found one thing wrong with it (wrong name in chap13) so congratz-ulations. I liked the ending and one thing needs to be said about this: It really is a small world. Luck writing ~Ibbit |
![]() ![]() ![]() O! O! Update! update! I really lovez your fic. I mean really...I lovez it. With a ginormous "Z" loveZ . |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! I did very much love the ending. In fact, I'm tempted to back and review every single chapter that I hadn't... I think I will, once I find the time. And I do, do hope you can find the inspiration to pick up the story again. I'm very muchly in love with the Welcome to the Universe universe. :) Great work, as always, -Bleep |
![]() ![]() ![]() that's it? awe it was cute. in a weird way.? |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's it! Your killing me, that can't be the end!Please, please continue!. I'm on my knees begging you! PLEASE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Overall a very good, accomplished story. Your characters were well written and believable. Felt the ending was rushed slightly, and it would have been nice to have seen more avenues explored. However, I enjoyed reading this story. I have the attention span of a gnat and you were able to keep my attention to the end. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a good ending! I'm so happy Jason is okay and things seem like they are going better for him! I feel sad for Ben though... I hope you do someday pick this story up again, it would be fun to read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really don't like Michael's mother! lol And YAY Sarah's gone! Can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What an emothional chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh no Jason! Poor thing! I'm on the edge of my seat, I can't wait to read the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() what a chapter! ( how are you updated so fast? Your making me fell bad for my lack of updates to my own stories.) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ben is leaving? And the end. Wow. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh man! So much drama! I don't want Ben to leave! I can't believe Sarah is the girl Michael's brother raped! What's going to happen? I can't wait for your next update ~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woah, I haven't reviewed in such a while. Apologies for that. Still loving the story. I like the relationship/friendship between Nicholas and Ben. Not keen on Sarah though. There was a slight slip on one of the chapters, thought you had lost your way slightly with the tone and flow of the story, but I am glad I was wrong. Still as good as ever. And updating really quick as well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() She's black mailing Nick with the baby! It's her own stupis fault she pregnant! Can I bitch slap her? great chapter. |