Reviews for Welcome To The Universe
Ibbit chapter 16 . 11/8/2009
ZOMG. That was awesome :D

It covered (as far as I know..) most of the major problems in the world. I only found one thing wrong with it (wrong name in chap13) so congratz-ulations.

I liked the ending and one thing needs to be said about this: It really is a small world.

Luck writing

red-headed psychopaths wanted chapter 16 . 2/10/2008
O! O! Update! update!

I really lovez your fic. I mean really...I lovez it. With a ginormous "Z"


killaccount chapter 16 . 1/29/2008
Yay! I did very much love the ending. In fact, I'm tempted to back and review every single chapter that I hadn't... I think I will, once I find the time.

And I do, do hope you can find the inspiration to pick up the story again. I'm very muchly in love with the Welcome to the Universe universe. :)

Great work, as always,

Jay827 chapter 16 . 12/28/2007
that's it?

awe it was cute. in a weird way.?
Lerene chapter 16 . 12/5/2007
That's it! Your killing me, that can't be the end!Please, please continue!. I'm on my knees begging you! PLEASE!
R.J Cleverley chapter 16 . 12/5/2007
Overall a very good, accomplished story. Your characters were well written and believable. Felt the ending was rushed slightly, and it would have been nice to have seen more avenues explored. However, I enjoyed reading this story. I have the attention span of a gnat and you were able to keep my attention to the end. :)
EstherDay chapter 16 . 12/4/2007
Such a good ending! I'm so happy Jason is okay and things seem like they are going better for him! I feel sad for Ben though... I hope you do someday pick this story up again, it would be fun to read!
EstherDay chapter 15 . 12/4/2007
I really don't like Michael's mother! lol And YAY Sarah's gone! Can't wait to read more!
Lerene chapter 15 . 12/4/2007
What an emothional chapter.
EstherDay chapter 14 . 11/30/2007
Oh no Jason! Poor thing! I'm on the edge of my seat, I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Lerene chapter 14 . 11/30/2007
what a chapter!

( how are you updated so fast? Your making me fell bad for my lack of updates to my own stories.)
Lerene chapter 13 . 11/29/2007
Ben is leaving?

And the end. Wow.
EstherDay chapter 13 . 11/27/2007
Oh man! So much drama! I don't want Ben to leave! I can't believe Sarah is the girl Michael's brother raped! What's going to happen? I can't wait for your next update ~
R.J Cleverley chapter 12 . 11/24/2007
Woah, I haven't reviewed in such a while. Apologies for that. Still loving the story. I like the relationship/friendship between Nicholas and Ben. Not keen on Sarah though. There was a slight slip on one of the chapters, thought you had lost your way slightly with the tone and flow of the story, but I am glad I was wrong. Still as good as ever. And updating really quick as well.
Lerene chapter 12 . 11/23/2007
She's black mailing Nick with the baby! It's her own stupis fault she pregnant! Can I bitch slap her?

great chapter.
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