Reviews for The Grain
ByYourSide chapter 1 . 4/20/2009
That was pretty amazing. :]

The grain-earth comparison worked supremely well; I felt insignificant even as I read it! Especially considering I'm hardly a pinprick on this grain of sand, but God somehow loves me anyway. My eyes are getting wider and wider as I type this. XD Oh, the affect of your poem...

I will feel exceedingly humble in the days to come. "I'm a pinprick on a grain of sand in an endless beach under a limitless God. I'm a pinprick on a grain of sand in an endless beach under a limitless God. I'm a..."

:)

*applauds you*
Renee Conner chapter 1 . 8/9/2007
Very nice poem. I love it!
WaylanderX chapter 1 . 8/7/2007
Insightful poem! Good piece! Keep writing! God bless.