Reviews for I Do
Sir Scott chapter 1 . 8/5/2007
Love and like are confusing emotions. You captured that well in this poem.

~SirScott
I.M.I chapter 1 . 8/5/2007
Her feelings are confused. I can tell that. Sadly I give you 6/10. The first response was right you're missing something. Not really good!
meowsha chapter 1 . 8/5/2007
I understand how you meant it might be contradictive, but it fit because those are natural feelings we feel at times.

I liked:

"You see

You’re bad karma for me"

This poem was better than the other one, but I still feel like it doesn't flow, it's really... missing something.

Keep at it though.

Peace&Love

-N