Reviews for Not Happening
Sir Scott chapter 1 . 8/5/2007
Nice poem, even though it was short.

~SirScott
meowsha chapter 1 . 8/5/2007
I don't really see any poetry in this.

I don't understand it.

It just seems like girl likes boy, girl thinks boy likes him...

and there's no proper ending.

There is nothing that fits.

Anyway,

I don't mean to be rude... just telling you what I think.

Perhaps more practice.

Peace&Love,

-N