Reviews for Phoenix
sarobando chapter 1 . 10/1/2007
wow this was a very thought-provoking piece. It's so true! keep it up!
Junaberry chapter 1 . 8/31/2007
That was amazing, filled with melancholy, beautiful.

Well done.

J
Thomicas chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
Whoa. This is really well written. You're very talented and very good with words. Good job!
Avian chapter 1 . 8/6/2007
I probably have already told you this, but you are a talented writer who looks at the real work in a imaginary way. You're like Van Gogh. You see the world for what it really is and what it really could be, but put your own colors and streaks into it.

Congrats on a job well done.
Bittersweetloss chapter 1 . 8/6/2007
Wow, that was really beautiful. The flow of it was amazing. And it was so poetic. Good job.
anonymously-me chapter 1 . 8/5/2007
I'm glad that you found yourself instead of relying on your "friend". I knew someone like that once. Nice essay.

P.S. I'm looking for a writer who needs a beta-reader
Oh. PuncH chapter 1 . 8/5/2007
I really like this a lot, great work. You know, I had a friend like this (that I sort of depended on) and when we drifted apart...I just didn't know what to do with myself. It's so nice to know other people have the same feelings. Well anyway...good work! XD