Reviews for I'm Sorry
casi chapter 1 . 8/20/2007
ok you know me :) hehehe... but really this cant be bout me... it cant... i mean gosh... what did you lie to me about... wait... what DID you lie to me about? hm oh well...

and im sorry didnt move on... but gosh... when you regret something and arent strong enough to do something about it sooner... what do you THINK happens? hm

but you didnt fuck up...

i can trust you...

and im pretty sure you have self-controle...im the one with non...

but again i repeat... you did NOT FUCK UP... gosh...

wow re reading that i think it sounds like im pissed... but im not :)

heheeh...

talk to ya later!

(you know i enjoy your writings... they are very good...and much better then mine)
The Reverse Edge Blade chapter 1 . 8/5/2007
I liked how you expressed your feelings through this poem. There was a lot of swearing in this poem, though. But it only means you have a lot of agression in you from that incident, so I can understand that.

I liked how you ended the poem, telling that you weren't sorry for something, when you had been saying the opposite until then.

Keep it up!

The Reverse Edge Blade