Reviews for Swan Diamond |
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![]() ![]() I really liked it. Thankyou |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don’t know real mangas, so I can’t judge how much you have invented, but for me it is quite fantastic. This dream is a good way to introduce Roy. I liked the sentence “In real life, he would have gotten right down to business: asked for her e-mail and phone number, or at least her name, instead of just standing there like an idiot.” |
![]() ![]() ![]() Habe Kopfschmerz und fühle mich nicht fit genug für englische Reviews, sorry! Gibt es dieses Treblinka-Buch, wahrscheinlich schon, echt Schülerquälerein. Das ganze ist natürlich Eskapismus pur, aber als solcher es das Kapitel gut gelungen! Wer träumt nicht davon, der schnöden Realität den Rücken zuzukehren, Prinzessin zu werden, verschönt zu werden und davonzufliegen. Ich werde weiter mitfliegen, wenn ich fitter bin. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would not take the bus if a had a Mercedes with driver, but I like these wordplays with "diamond" "Famous Gemstones", etc |
![]() ![]() ![]() I could almost see this trailer. Did you ever try to draw pictures for that manga? I ask this because you are studying Creative Arts |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was so good that i printed it out because i had to go to school but i couldn't pull myself away from it. it was like 40 pages! haha so towards the end i think maybe it got a bit more rushed than the rest of the story. please please please write a million more stories as amazing as this! i promise to read and review! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow i wish this was a real anime! i would totally watch it and iv'e only read the first part! great start! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like how smooth this chapter went. You seemed to answer all the readers questions. Good work! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I must say your introduction pulls the reader in. I now must know what happens. Good work. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I figured why review all the chapters after you read them, when you can just place a good review at the end? So here it is. Everything you've written made me feel like I was reading a professional author's writing. An actaul book, which made me want to read more and more. The description, the plot and the whole layout of the story was just perfect in my opinion. The opening and ending themes played an actaul visual in my mind. The songs matched them wonderfully as well, especially the ending theme, 'Black Diamond'. Oh, now you've inspired me to write my own story! I do hope you fulfill your greatest dream, and as far as I'm concerned, you're nearly there! Sincerely, Nikki |
![]() ![]() ![]() Still Wonderful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a wonderful author! I can't believe this hasn't been made into an anime yet! |
![]() ![]() ![]() One word. Wonderful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I actaully saw this as I read it! It would be wonderful if this was a real anime. I'd watch it all the time! -Nikki |
![]() ![]() ![]() 15 chapters and no reviews? Tch. Some readers are getting lazy, I think your prologue was extremely interesting and it drew me in quite well. So I'll probably be reviewing each chapter! -Nikki |