Reviews for Greedy Soul
Yaolyn chapter 1 . 9/2/2007
I know little to nothing about haikus, but I really love the message in this one.
tearing hands chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
I love the bolded "nothing" and the title and the message. Good job.
Thenardier chapter 1 . 8/8/2007
Nicely written, love the choice of the title.
Basara chapter 1 . 8/7/2007
hm... well, if things don't go in one's way... well, it's option to do that... but not much...

xDancingintheRainx chapter 1 . 8/6/2007
I like the independence of this piece and the untraditional form of haiku. Great work!
andfound815 chapter 1 . 8/6/2007
I like it! Great job... powerful.

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Chidori Nadare chapter 1 . 8/6/2007
True love and happiness can never be bought by money. The emphasis on nothing just makes the message clear. Good job!

Next Exit chapter 1 . 8/5/2007
a tip about haikus... they are technically not a haiku if all you do is take a sentence and break it up by syllable. its supposed to be 3 separate thoughts that tie together. not that i always follow this rule, but it might be helpful the next time you write a haiku.