Reviews for Meaning, With All of My Heart
Jecori chapter 1 . 8/8/2007
aww..this is so beautiful. it' just overflowing with emotion and trueness :) Who would ever flame this? not that i ever flame...haha

only thing is "I know that you we both make each other weak."

just take out the 'you'. other than that, wonderful work :)

-vesta
TheDJ chapter 1 . 8/6/2007
Stay true,

Don’t stay blue…

There is no reason anymore to hide,

They lied,

You are wonderful. - I loved those lines and loved the poem. I really enjoyed it, thank you for putting it up. I don't think anyone would critisize it - well written. Well done. -TheDJ
amelodyofspring chapter 1 . 8/6/2007
Very good work, I enjoyed reading it. I'm not usually for long poems like this, but I must say this was well written and I enjoyed it.

Hehe, I love the word "ostentatious". It sounds so cool! _

srz

xoxoxo
The Angel in Black chapter 1 . 8/5/2007
Ah! I am proud. I stumbled upon this by chance, too. Ha ha! I happened to notice you pen name on the Just In thing, so I clicked. And it was great! I like. Very descriptive, but not overpowering. Good job.