|Reviews for Hold|
| Basara chapter 1 . 8/9/2007
hm... it shows something... more like a connection... but with different ideas on how to 'hold'...
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 8/8/2007
This captures a remarkable voice for a haiku. It creates that hint of nothing's ever good enough or correctly done. Quite interestingly situated as well. Thought provoking. Good haiku.
| In State of Agony chapter 1 . 8/8/2007
| Chidori Nadare chapter 1 . 8/7/2007
Um...If you read it at first, the meaning looks so shallow. But if you read several time and look underneath the underneath, the poem itself shows you its real meaning. Very beautiful piece.
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 8/6/2007