Awesome story!'

UPDATE THIS!

This is so good! Great characters and such an amazing, original idea! Don't give up on this!

PLEASE write MORE! I LOVE THIS STORY!

This story is way good. I am totally pulled into it. I read the chapters all in one afternoon, so good. I like Death even though he is kind of the bad guy. And I am really looking forward to more of the relationship and the new rules. Exciting! Hope to see an update soon, but it's okay if you don't.

i think it's really intriguing

i liked it :D

do update soon!

man Death is creepy, yet I don't hate him... I think he is weird, yet sweet.

I can see how you would enjoy writting the cell phone's voice, she can get ight down to the facts without presenting, or maybe without giving reverence to, emotion. Those characters are always the easiest, for some at least! I enjoyed Death the most in this chapter though. I realize he is the bad guy in mainstream sense, but I always, always go for the dark man trying to steal the main, no matter how insane they are. So, i'm roting for Death, but only if he can make the life of Anne happy, which I think he can do. This all depending on Anne, of course. Thanks so much for posting! I enjoyed the update emensely, but without spell check I'm lost, forgive my errors! Do you mind if I put your story on my favorites?

i liked this chapter a lot. keep up the lovely work!

i do like the woman's character, she's nifty, and i'm kinda excited/sad for our lead girl, but i can't wait for it to develop!

keep it up and update soon

i love your plot

I honestly can't imagine falling more in love with this story. I can't wait for you to update, and despite my hatred of naggers, I have to be a hypocrite just this once and BEG you to update...please accept my most sincere apology for that which couldn't be avoided...

Eternally Yours,

Lucia

i really love this story. soo creative! keep up the super work!

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YES!

Hey,

First off, amazing chapter, I absolutely love it and I love Death's character, can I please have him? Why doesn't someone like him exist in real life. I am pretty sure Death is telling the truth, he loves her, I can tell, he would do anything to protect her. (Wish guys like him existed in real life! Jeez, life's so unfair!)

Secondly, I am more than happy to help you if you need to discuss your story, although I'm not sure why you need help seeing you are very talented and your fic rocks and flows very well. If you have other offers, I take no offence whatsoever.

Anyways, I really hope you update soon, this is a fantabulous fic! Btw, have I mentioned I love your character Death?

Tecna ;)