Reviews for Breathing Exercises at 2am
Tytherpol chapter 1 . 8/12/2007
the images are very strong.

the font effects are a little distracting, but the poem wouldn't work with out them, i don't think.
Sir Scott chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
This really describes the effects of trying to quit smoking. I agree it's a bitch. I quit smoking once and had dreams of a pipe chasing me around my house. After about a month of that I started smoking again.

Basara chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
just like other addictive drugs ( include cigars, cigarettes etc ) were too sick with it yet we still find and buy them...

lymli chapter 1 . 8/10/2007
the last lines: "Inhale Exhale I'm sick of breathing for you" are amazing, I think, the whole poem has an interesting writing
Madame Y chapter 1 . 8/7/2007
Cool. I especially like how this ties in with drugs and addiction!