Reviews for I Keep Watch
nendo-chan chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
Should I be disturbed or humanized that I've felt this way?
Tytherpol chapter 1 . 8/8/2007
in all honesty, i don't think i've ever actually sat and read an entire piece of prose before this. if i have, then it has been a while ago.

i liked it. it had a lot feeling in it,

and you were simply telling. not showing.

so because of that , the words were fierce, but they didn't seem forceful.

"wears high school fashions and pretends to dance tango" i love that a lot. :)

nice job on this, i think. -ty.