Reviews for Your Own Disaster
fairytale failure chapter 3 . 10/12/2007
I can't wait to see what you do with this - please continue! I love the story about how they met, it was really sweet. The third chapter was my favourite, and the second my least..some of the dialogue did not sound quite true. However, the line 'He obviously didn’t know that her job didn’t require a fully functioning heart' was brilliant, along with the first line in the third chapter, the part about a scene becoming a photograph and then a memory.

That song is really awesome, too. Especially the part like a canon in the second half. I flipped to it on my ipod and listened to it while reading this :)
DreamlessInfinity chapter 1 . 8/10/2007
Beautiful! I love your writing style, it’s so eloquent! I’m hoping that this isn’t a oneshot; I’d love to read more!

*There was one spelling error. When he’s talking he says ‘some’ instead of ‘come’. Slightly confusing, but nothing major. You may want to change it*

Dreamless
HenneyBuggyBand chapter 1 . 8/9/2007
how gut wrenching. i love it.