Oh this is so cute. I bought your book! A bit sad that the 'how much bigger' part is left out but otherwise it's still nice. I also like the Fair One with Golden Locks.

I enjoyed this so much! Thanks for the laughs! It was truly a gem!

This was truly a fantastic story.

I laughed so hard at the 'how much bigger' part XD

Ahahahaha. "How much bigger" my God this is hilarious.

Can you send me the link to your book please? :3

Wonderful story!

Okay, I couldn't log in into my account because my phone is sh*tty.

That was hella cute.
Also, it reminded me of The Castle of the White Cat. (I don't know if I got the title right cause I read the tale in Spanish so I just translated the title).
Loved it, wanna fave but can't at the moment, but I will once I get on my laptop hehe.

Also, loved your writing style.

AWWW I liked it! it was verry cute

Loved the story thanks for sharing x

I found this little tale to be nice and cute. I even had myself saying a little "awe" at the end. :)

The ending made me laugh. :) Loved it!

I remember this tale! ... Somewhat... But the ending to both this and the original was heart-warming, touching, and (for your story) scandalishly funny. I like how the doll was amusing and Espin was content with his choices. I'll look for your other stories on Amazon and plz continue writing!

Aha! His final words are honestly the best. Great story :)

I really love it.

I mean, I'm in love with fairy tales ( why? don't ask, 'cause I don't know ), and also, I'm in love with Slash stories. So, again, I really love it.

And, yeah, I'm gonna read your other stories in Amazon~

likey! I like classic stories like this. I have copied it for my future children... ;)