Reviews for The Doll in the Grass
Oki chapter 1 . 6/26/2017
Oh this is so cute. I bought your book! A bit sad that the 'how much bigger' part is left out but otherwise it's still nice. I also like the Fair One with Golden Locks.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/26/2016
I enjoyed this so much! Thanks for the laughs! It was truly a gem!
Ishotthealbatross chapter 1 . 11/19/2015
This was truly a fantastic story.

I laughed so hard at the 'how much bigger' part XD
Fobbster chapter 1 . 5/31/2015
Ahahahaha. "How much bigger" my God this is hilarious.
EPuppy chapter 1 . 10/7/2013
Can you send me the link to your book please? :3
Vlurry19 chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
Wonderful story!
r.p. ann chapter 1 . 4/16/2013
Okay, I couldn't log in into my account because my phone is sh*tty.

That was hella cute.
Also, it reminded me of The Castle of the White Cat. (I don't know if I got the title right cause I read the tale in Spanish so I just translated the title).
Loved it, wanna fave but can't at the moment, but I will once I get on my laptop hehe.

Also, loved your writing style.
Its all the same chapter 1 . 12/12/2012
AWWW I liked it! it was verry cute
Arizona Cross chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
Loved the story thanks for sharing x
Cindy chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
I found this little tale to be nice and cute. I even had myself saying a little "awe" at the end. :)
AnonymousReviewer chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
The ending made me laugh. :) Loved it!
Mimi Chase 02 chapter 1 . 6/20/2012
I remember this tale! ... Somewhat... But the ending to both this and the original was heart-warming, touching, and (for your story) scandalishly funny. I like how the doll was amusing and Espin was content with his choices. I'll look for your other stories on Amazon and plz continue writing!
amarillo chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
Aha! His final words are honestly the best. Great story :)
Psycho Teddy Bear chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
I really love it.

I mean, I'm in love with fairy tales ( why? don't ask, 'cause I don't know ), and also, I'm in love with Slash stories. So, again, I really love it.

And, yeah, I'm gonna read your other stories in Amazon~
k4k chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
likey! I like classic stories like this. I have copied it for my future children... ;)
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