Reviews for Urban legend
Dharman117 chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
Very good character and setting description, if there was an epilogue to this story I'd love to read it!
J Author chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
I've heard this story in dozens of variations, but this is one of the best.
Luna Turner chapter 1 . 8/24/2007
That was good. I enjoyed reading it. But there was QUITE a few typos. Don't worry, it's a pet peeve of mine. Other than typographical errors,it was very good. Nice job.

Cal Kain chapter 1 . 8/24/2007
that was a really good short story...i liked how you made it seem like their was some disturbing presence, but didn't say anything until the end.
Le Tranquille chapter 1 . 8/13/2007
Oh my god. This scared heart literally dropped when you said " ever since she stopped to change the tire there had been a man in the back seat with an axe in his hand." This was a great story, but you did have some punctuation errors and a lot of spelling errors, but I do that all the time so it's no big deal. Great job! Could you R&R my story: That boy on a bike? If you could, that'd be great. Thanks.
antonia chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
Omg,that freaked me out! Really creepy...
blister chapter 1 . 8/10/2007
Wow...I have heard that before but it's still scary. :P