Reviews for Don't love me anymore
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 11/8/2007
This poem is so heartbreaking. Well written piece.

Twilight Starr
Kindre Turnany chapter 1 . 8/17/2007
This was so sad and heart wrenching. You used your punctuation a bit randomly though...
Kristie Marie chapter 1 . 8/12/2007
I love how you can describ thigs in a different way that others wouldn't but still get what your saying. The first three lines I don't get as well. But great poem! Keep it up

(i'm a member idk if u reply to comments or not)

Kristie Marie
concerto49 chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
You sure do have a different imagination. I never thought things could be described this way.

Interesting. Guess some people think a lot differently.

Ooh it got a touch scary and all too.

Anyhow. Cheers.

Yeah guess things happen. We just have to accept. Cheer up! There's still hope.
Stella Grimshaw chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
This was a very cute poem but at the same time raw. It was very good and reminded me of the work I had just written last night, sadly you portrayed this much better than I did, mines more of a rant haha, keep up the fantastic work.
I.M.I chapter 1 . 8/10/2007
I love it! I think its about this girl who had an itimate relationship with this boy. Then he broke her heart now she's ready to move on.