Reviews for scattered
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 10/24/2007
I like this.. the first stanza was great and I love the whole ida of real in your heart.. thats awesome..
Charity F chapter 1 . 8/19/2007
Such complete description of incompleteness...
Nonya Soum chapter 1 . 8/13/2007
As long as a piece survives, anything scattered can be saved.

Beautiful. I tried to pick little lines out to show how much I like the entire thing, but once again I just couldn't pick one. Great poem! Have I mentioned I adore your writing style? Great job!

Write on!
Stella Grimshaw chapter 1 . 8/12/2007
Another Fantastic Poem.
Aquafied chapter 1 . 8/10/2007
your work has moved more from nature to love

that is recently, of course

this has a beautiful touch
S. Ben Beach chapter 1 . 8/10/2007
wow, very moving.

The imagery was like watching a movie... very picturesque. The first stanza pretty much matches what I've said, and it fits in well with the others. Like love that's lost but still intact. Keep writing :)
heresyisforlosers chapter 1 . 8/10/2007
love this- i like the context of it, the images it brings up, and the paranthesis. Great idea for a poem.

;-) sunny
cherz chapter 1 . 8/10/2007
Aww, this is sweet! The imagery that comes with reading the poem is amazing
The Postscript chapter 1 . 8/10/2007
Beautiful. My sister and I had an interesting conversation about love this evening. It will always be something to ponder and reflect, thoughts to breath and grow upon. Wonderful write. I especially thought the first stanza was well written. Keep writing, k.
Ritsu chapter 1 . 8/10/2007
Beautiful.. :3

Made me sad, though.
Kenken chapter 1 . 8/10/2007
nice poem! and nice ending too, quite smooth