Reviews for Shattered, Beaten, and Broken
found.eventually chapter 14 . 8/20/2007
aw..

that was a nice ending.

) great job, you.
found.eventually chapter 13 . 8/20/2007
Michael is WHAT?

honestly, i did NOT see that coming.

you're really, really good at writing this, all the unexpected twists here and there. )
found.eventually chapter 12 . 8/20/2007
hahahaa.

yeah it's short. but i get it.

so it's good. in a short way.

uh, yeah.

am i making any sense here?
found.eventually chapter 11 . 8/20/2007
Dexterous is disgusting..

i'm imagining him as..

i don't know

something like eric from the phantom of the opera.

no, even ERIC is better.
found.eventually chapter 10 . 8/19/2007
oh, i was wrong.

they ain't together. ( bummer, then.

THOMAS HAS A DAUGHTER?
found.eventually chapter 9 . 8/19/2007
they're together so soon?

hahaha. i like the way you wrote the interaction between the mum and daughter, it's nice. )
found.eventually chapter 8 . 8/19/2007
just so you know, i'm smiling like a goofball right now.

THAT"S SO SWETT!

) you're good at this.

ps: and you update really fast, too! XP
Kendyl Burch chapter 14 . 8/18/2007
very good ending, congratulations
Kendyl Burch chapter 13 . 8/18/2007
wow half brothers! didnt see that one coming... so he'll be her childs uncle
Kendyl Burch chapter 11 . 8/18/2007
wow very dramatic, i hope she can get herself out of this one.
Kendyl Burch chapter 10 . 8/18/2007
damn two guys after her, lucky girl
Kendyl Burch chapter 9 . 8/18/2007
Its understandable she wants them dead, i would too
Kendyl Burch chapter 8 . 8/18/2007
aww bri and michael...so cute lol. When i was reading i came across this “Oh, Bri. Why have you done?” Just wondering if thats supposed to be 'what' not 'why'
found.eventually chapter 7 . 8/17/2007
sometimes i want to be a butterfly. haha.

she's not as strong as she used to be now, no?
found.eventually chapter 6 . 8/17/2007
she sounded so... vulnerable in this chapter.

i like the way you wrote it. the way you expressed her fear, her emotions. a job well done, i'd say. )
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