Reviews for Shattered, Beaten, and Broken
found.eventually chapter 5 . 8/17/2007
the man from the nightmare..

is it dexterous? )
found.eventually chapter 4 . 8/17/2007
after scrolling through the first chapter again and again, i found... nothing.

unless it's masked man or somethin like that?

but that ain't really a nickname... or is it?

Dexterous is pretty creepy.
found.eventually chapter 3 . 8/17/2007
AW.

a really sweet start, and you've shown a different side of Brianne. A strong proof that there is a child within everyone. )

oh, and can i have michael, please? HAH.
Kendyl Burch chapter 7 . 8/16/2007
Love the introduction of Dr Sanger, not only is this someone that Brianne can confide in, it's someone that has been where she has and survived, which will give her the strength she needs to do the same thing
Kendyl Burch chapter 6 . 8/16/2007
wow this chapter showed so much raw emotion that was absolutely spot on. BRAVO!
Kendyl Burch chapter 5 . 8/16/2007
Ok once again she is one tough chick! After everything she's gone through, she still has the courage to fight, i wish i was more like that sometimes. Good chapter, love the back story with her first rapist, it really sets the scene
Kendyl Burch chapter 4 . 8/16/2007
oh things are getting interesting...this guy is really creepy but what more can u expect from the bad guy. Anyway good work
Kendyl Burch chapter 3 . 8/16/2007
Aw Micheal and Brianna's characters are so cute together, i love how u've given her this real childish view and vocabulary, it works well with her history. Keep it up
found.eventually chapter 2 . 8/15/2007
i can NEVER write like you do.

damn.

impressive work there, and i'm starting to love her character and the energy you put into her.

keep it up! )
found.eventually chapter 1 . 8/15/2007
a little fast, but it's pretty awesome.

i like brianne's name, and i think it suits her character. strong.
Kendyl Burch chapter 2 . 8/14/2007
Another great chapter, your main character is one tough chick. She's gone through so much that i wonder how she's going to adjust to the real world any. Good on her for fighting back, it takes someone really strong to be able to come back from something like that.
Kendyl Burch chapter 1 . 8/13/2007
WOW! Hell of a way to start a story, well structured, good pace and entertaining. Keep it up
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