Reviews for Shit Hits The Fan
i.am.pockets chapter 1 . 8/25/2007
I love you stix.
sweets555 chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
that ass...ill help! ive got connections here in IL...

well written, you can feel the gonna-kill-him energy.

ill add pockets to my alert!
The Reverse Edge Blade chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
Sorry, but this was not a good one. It was too many swear-words; it simply made the poem lose it's context. Nor did you use words that described well how you felt, except that you were really angry, which isn't good enough. You should at least try to say something about who you are angry at, or why you are angry. Sorry, mate, but this fic was just not pleasant to read.

The Reverse Edge Blade
gn0sis chapter 1 . 8/10/2007
Guys can be jerks, but so can women. Get angry if it's justified, but just remember that humans are humans no matter what their sex.

As to your story, you're inventive enough with your tortures. I wish you the best of luck, but don't get in over your head.