This is realy good, please write more! D

Wow I really liked this story

but I dk want more of them 3

but this is just fine

I like the ending damnn

threesum hehehe

good great story

WTF? Why the HELL do you only have six reviews for this story. I swear to god the people who are reading this and not reviewing are annoying. You had the time to read, so have the time to review, dumbass. Anyways. I loved it! You're an amazing author and I liked it all. And as for the sex scene, one word: hotness...flargtcho. Or two. Yes. Flargtcho. It's a word. It's just so new (it was literally just created this second - honestly) that it isn't yet in the dictionary. So I'll give you a definition: fricken' hot! See? I told ya it was a word. Anyhoo. Loved the story, please please please update soon and I'll be the crazy-stalker fan! Woo! Just kidding. But you DO need to update. Stop slacking! Get up off your ass and WRITE! Haha. I'm only partially kidding, by the way. Let that be a warning.

is there more? omg i feel like drawing this out or writing something like this! you should definitely write more! w

Oh! I like!

i love it, it sounds really good I hope to read more soon

heh...that was cute...incredibly unrealistic...but cute! Thanks for fixing the spaces btw.

wow that was cute. I loved it!

hey, I started reading this and it sound interesting but I can't deal with the lack of spaces...it hurts my brain...I'd be great if you tried to fix that, please?