Reviews for Nights
Redflower56 chapter 1 . 11/22/2003
I am profoundly impressed by the depth of your words. The use of metaphors to describe your family is ingenious. I'm thinking it is sister, brother, mother, father
avanents chapter 1 . 2/5/2002
I think i've begun to influence you, maybe just a little, no?
Aralyn St.Crow chapter 1 . 4/5/2001
I love the way this is written. You have serious talent :)
MemoryNo1 chapter 1 . 3/30/2001
Nice job with the symbolism. Is it your mother, brother, sister, dad? I'm not positive, but that's what I think. Write more, but make sure u continue with the pattern you've set in the beginning of the piece. For ex. you started off w/some kind of rhyme scheme in the beginning, but u abandoned it later on. Make sure u stay consistent. Other than that, terrific, I liked it a lot, and I look forward to reading more!
Nii chapter 1 . 3/29/2001
*sigh* it would definetly be worth it. that was really good, though! keep it up!