Reviews for An Obvious Oblivion
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
Great story. Nice work on getting into character. Keep writing!

Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have a lovely day and a wonderful summer.

Twilight Starr
Adaku chapter 1 . 9/15/2007
OMG! This is so inspirarional. However I'm confused- I know shes dead and like sees her family mourning for her but then this handsome guy she sees- does he see her or she remembers how he touched her? (she's in love with him right). Very interesting. Thinking of doing Craft Moon again- but thats left to come. I like the style you used here- very emotional.

till next time

adakua
earlkgm chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
it's interesting how you make the readers know what the girl is thinking and feeling and also makes us her brother too.
blister chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
BEAUTIFUL-it was almost like poetry the way the words flowed.