that was really short and sweet

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i think it was awesome!

although a tad sad.

but still!

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oh geez, i think i'm gonna cry and i'm in a crowded room too. that was so heartbreakingly sad. what i love about this the most is the fact that it shows their will power over love; that sometimes it doesn't work out to be so happily ever after. lol, but that doesn't stop my mind from thinking of a way they and up job. by the way, what book are you reading that gave you this idea? excellent one-shot :)

Aww. That makes me sad. lol. What book were you reading?

that was soo sad yet soo moving. ) Looved it!

mm very cool concept and kinda sad lol anyway cool one shot :p i feel kinda sad about how they cant be together and he seemed very sweet :)

Wow... What a sad, sweet, and honest story. I just loved.

The way you ended it did break my heart. But I loved how much emotion was put in this story. It was simple and clean cut for a One-Shot. I think you did good with this idea.

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I've read a lot of your other stories and they're all brilliant.. this one is no exception. Very moving, but so sad! I like happy endings so I'm hoping they got theirs. :)

aw, this was sad.

it kind of reminded me of aladdin, haha.

i still really liked it though, keep up the great work!

This was so sweet, I'm a sucker for the whole forbidden love stuff. good job.

Gah, I love how it isn't he usual 'princess and knight' story. Oh, the fluff. You are quite good at it, I have to say.

Gah! That was sad...

Very well written but yeck...here I was just getting out of the sad story kick...lol

simply beautiful. it says this is a one-shot, but i think you should make it into a story. this would be a wonderful prologue. :)

So, I have a ton of your storys on alert and I love everything I've read of yours but I don't remember if I've reviewed any of it. So if I haven't then okay, here's my first review: That story was amazing. The poor princess and knight, it's so sad..but your writing skill is fantastic. I mean the way you come up with sentences like 'Her long blonde hair flowed quietly in the night breeze as silence wrapped around her like a warm feathered blanket' is just amazing. You're a very talented author. Great story line too, I liked the whole princess and knight thing. Brilliant.