Reviews for The Knight and His Princess |
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![]() ![]() ![]() that was really short and sweet ] i think it was awesome! although a tad sad. but still! x bubble |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh geez, i think i'm gonna cry and i'm in a crowded room too. that was so heartbreakingly sad. what i love about this the most is the fact that it shows their will power over love; that sometimes it doesn't work out to be so happily ever after. lol, but that doesn't stop my mind from thinking of a way they and up job. by the way, what book are you reading that gave you this idea? excellent one-shot :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww. That makes me sad. lol. What book were you reading? |
![]() ![]() that was soo sad yet soo moving. ) Looved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() mm very cool concept and kinda sad lol anyway cool one shot :p i feel kinda sad about how they cant be together and he seemed very sweet :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow... What a sad, sweet, and honest story. I just loved. The way you ended it did break my heart. But I loved how much emotion was put in this story. It was simple and clean cut for a One-Shot. I think you did good with this idea. ...Snow |
![]() ![]() I've read a lot of your other stories and they're all brilliant.. this one is no exception. Very moving, but so sad! I like happy endings so I'm hoping they got theirs. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw, this was sad. it kind of reminded me of aladdin, haha. i still really liked it though, keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was so sweet, I'm a sucker for the whole forbidden love stuff. good job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gah, I love how it isn't he usual 'princess and knight' story. Oh, the fluff. You are quite good at it, I have to say. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gah! That was sad... Very well written but yeck...here I was just getting out of the sad story kick...lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() simply beautiful. it says this is a one-shot, but i think you should make it into a story. this would be a wonderful prologue. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() So, I have a ton of your storys on alert and I love everything I've read of yours but I don't remember if I've reviewed any of it. So if I haven't then okay, here's my first review: That story was amazing. The poor princess and knight, it's so sad..but your writing skill is fantastic. I mean the way you come up with sentences like 'Her long blonde hair flowed quietly in the night breeze as silence wrapped around her like a warm feathered blanket' is just amazing. You're a very talented author. Great story line too, I liked the whole princess and knight thing. Brilliant. |