|Reviews for Coffee Mug|
| AnthoNYC - ToNY chapter 1 . 10/20/2007
Nice short story. It made me feel sympathy for the character in this story. I wouldn't have any suggestions to improve it because it's great the way it is - it's your own style and nothing else, and it makes it unique and brilliant in my definition. I'm actually glad I found this.
I'm adding it to my favorites, if you don't mind : ).
AnthoNYC - ToNY
| The Reverse Edge Blade chapter 1 . 8/14/2007
This was really sad. You'd expressed the character's feelings really well! I liked your descriptions through the fic! You're good with descriptions!
I liked how you kept the story so short, with the sudden ending.
One tiny little thing, though. I'm hardly ever picky, but you said you wanted people to tell you if there was anything you could improve.
It's not much, but...you'd written "mind" instead of "mine" one place in your story.
This was beautiful! Keep it up!
The Reverse Edge Blade
| RichardJoyson chapter 1 . 8/12/2007
Wow! That is really well written, the flow is almost poetic. You moved seamlessly from one idea to another. I would watch the verbiage just a little bit, it gets a little too wordy in places. But very impressive just the same