Very well written. This is a different view on a moral issue and its extremely well done. Though still personally i don't condone this behavior. Great Job :)

Nice, a view from the other side. I like it. There was more in the first chapter but it's still good.

Good lord, that was absolutely amazing. It's intensely felt from a reader's point of view.

deep...its too sensational for words...i love it! and i love how there are no words!

amazingly (is that a word?) written i felt like i was actually apart of it...not that i mind ;)

This had a lot of potential at first. Then it just turned into porn.

I was sort of wishing that the girl would show a little compassion towards him but it's best to do so when it all ends.

really great, keep going

brilliantly written. props ;)