Have you posted this story somewhere else? Because I can only see the first chapter. Pleae provide a link to this story. Thsnks!

I liked it. It was okay. There were a LOT of spelling issues and typos. I liked the characters, their 'diversity' was interesting, but there's one character who I hated most, and that's Jayden. From the start all I can see him as is a whiney little brat who's jaded, selfish, and has an irrational hate for nearly everyone. If I'm honest, I actually preferred Angela to Jayden. At least she wasn't whining all the time, fake or not. Interesting story concept

I loved this story! The ending was so sweet :) jayden was such a cutie and Tory was a great older brother. Awesome job

love this
it was soo much fun reading!

Why Jayden, I think you would get along marvelously with my character Drew. Very well, in fact. Right up the same alley as you are, let me tell you! 'Cept he's the older brother...

(Good so far! I hope I can finish the rest tonight...)

Yay! I finished it! And I'm so glad I did! This was great! I mean gosh, I'm not into incest in fact I find it a little disturbing, but this was just great. I don't know what compelled me to read this, but I'm extremely happy I did!

Ooo really good so far. And I'm a guy and I have curves too! So awesome! XD (My girlfriend makes A point of teasing me about it though... I just thinks shes just jealous that she cant be as hot as me though)Anyway that was off topic I cant' wait to read the rest of this awesome story! (Sadly its one in the morning and I can barely keep my eyes open)

Damn, I just can't stop reading this. great job,

Alex Dark

This was gonna happen sometime, but I still don't like Shane for any reason. Hope things work out and Jayden gets Skyler off his back.

Ouch. Skyler might have been the real deal after all. I just don't care for him too much because he's in the way. Maybe Jayden was different from his other 'bitches.'

Just keeps getting better. I don't like skyler that much. Honestly, he's probably playing Jayden all the way.

This is really getting good. i was thinking you would do something like this. Things had to escalate considering how bad Shane is.

keep up the good work,

Alex dark

I am actually enjoying this. [not meant as disrespect and offense] I might as well explain this ...

I normally don't like stories that have chapters that are as short as this. I don't always read stories with people who are emo either, but there are the occasional ones that I like. I honestly don't find the incest that bad, at least in this case anyway. It just really depends on how things are and who it is I guess. Considering the description of the characters I really don't blame him.

I am gonna keep reading this.

okey okey , maybe i skipped this but how many years has this kid exactly?

oh and very good story dude

Hey!

Great story! I had to just sit down and read it all in one go, stayed up until midnight to finish it but I'm only now writing the review because I fell asleep...oops. It was so good to get Tory's POV at the end, I loved it.

Mav