|Reviews for Now and Forever in Secret|
| starcrossedlover01 chapter 18 . 8/18/2007
...LMFAO! OMG! THAT'S FUNNY! wow. that was good. i think you should just have jayden say he's not ready or somethin' or have him say yes and make things more complicated. lol.
| Oxaloacetate chapter 16 . 8/18/2007
Jayden is very forward,good for think what they did in the shower...XD there is gonna be a lemony scene in the next chappy most likely...
| unbound chapter 17 . 8/18/2007
Holy schweet HELL! If this got any HOTTER I think I would've just burst into fucking FLAMES! YUM. They are SO my new addiction. LERVE!
SO knew Tory LERVED that adorably naughty pocket pet of mine. SO knew all he needed was a little time, then- DAMN. When Tory makes a decision it'a all or nothing! And he's totally adorable when he's really in love. He-he
They are too MAD SCHWEET for words:
"He turns back over and holds my hand, kissing my fingers. 'We'll have to be together in secret Jayden no matter what. I don't want you to hurt anymore.'
I look into his blue eyes and kiss his lips. ' I'll be your secret forever Tory, I love you.'
He blushes then bites his lip, ' I love you too Jayden, my little secret.'"
Aww...Fuck-me-senseless. Now I want to ruffle their hair and put them BOTH in my pocket.
Gotta have MORE
| LifeisCereal chapter 17 . 8/17/2007
OMFG- NEXT CHAPTER xD
| unbound chapter 16 . 8/17/2007
Holy shit! Tory and Jayden...DE-EFFIN'-LICIOUS! XP DAMN! (blushin' so much my skin's gotta be melting right-the fuck-off my body!) SHIT! FUCK-ME. (no, this is not a proposition, I'm trying to cool down) SO can't even believe how HOT that made me! My naughty little pocket pet can be VERY PERSUASIVE when he knows what he wants. He-he.
WTF. I'm giving my opinion here. If you don't like it- fuck off! Bro on bro is like a GAZILLION times hotter than just boy on boy to me. OMG! And those two are addictively DANGEROUS- pure MAD SCHWEETNESS! I've not read a svexier boy on boy pairing.
PS. I still think Tory just needs some more time. ;P
| Amerez chapter 16 . 8/17/2007
uhm...I wonder if Tory really likes him, or is just doing it to make him happy...
| unbound chapter 15 . 8/17/2007
Damn. (wipes tears and sniffs) My dear, sweet, beloved little pocket pet. (pets his hair, smoothing it back behind his ears, humming a RJA's GA under her breath...I just believe I can hear Jayden's heart in it) I'm so SORRY you had to endure this...
Hey...(whispers) Don't tell Jayden, but I'm still hopeful for he and Tory. If I'm wrong, sue my fucking ass. But, I just think Tory needs some time to come to grips with his own feelings for his '#1 weakness', that's all. I mean, it IS a LOT to take in all at once. Let'im chew on it for a little while so it can sink in. It just seems like he hasn't realized it yet.
Yes, I'm a hopeless fuckin' romantic- bite me! I just want Jayden to be happy. I can't help it! He's my flavorite. (blushin')
Still hopin' for more
| MyNameIsTaken chapter 16 . 8/17/2007
So what does Tory feel for Jay? I'm totally confused. whatever.
| Amerez chapter 15 . 8/17/2007
omg...how could you do that! well, I guess it's a believable reaction, but still. I hope things work out.
| MyNameIsTaken chapter 15 . 8/17/2007
Why does Jayden never get love. TT-TT Poor baby. Damn Tory!
| Esquirella chapter 15 . 8/17/2007
Oh no! I knew something bad would happen! And what's up with that Kasey kid. I don't like him at all!
| squall-almasy27 chapter 15 . 8/17/2007
omg, is that all? holy crap! please update...i like the but i do have to comment on the monologues which sometimes sound like it's not really jayden talking but the author...erm...yeah. and the verfremdungseffect...uh, sorry...i mean that technique (yes, its some german term to refer to a technique) wherein your character suddenly talks to the readers (actually, its usually used in drama) is sort of done alright for me...anyway, i like the story...very entertaining. keep it up. :D
| unbound chapter 14 . 8/17/2007
Tight, tan bod with blue-green eyes and white blonde hair? DAMN. (blushin' all OVER) My sweet little pocket pet's lookin' like a naughty angel! SHIT! Yah. (there goes my face, melting right off)
WTF! PROBATION? DAMN. (revelation dawns) Oh little pocket pet...(I twirl some of his GORGEOUS platinum hair in my fingers) There's still something you could do...remember? 'NO HOPE of satisfaction-TORTURE not death'. (I bat my eyes at my beloved pet) Yah. I LERVE vicious justice ;P
"Two boobrillaz" lol LERVE Jayden's humor!
She finally did the right thing encouraging you to tell Tory but WTF! Moving onto Sky's property?(spanks naughty pocket pet) Your mother makes you happy...sort of...so I want you to have her somewhere in your life. But, what're you gonna do when you and Sky break it off? Coz hello-o Tory's SO gonna be yours...when you tell'im that is. He-he YUMMY. (blushin')
| unbound chapter 13 . 8/16/2007
SHIT! (blushin' so much my fucking 'face feels like it's gonna melt right off'! He liked the sound of my pet name for'im.) MAD SWEET! SO mine. (smooches pocket pet and runs, blushin' like a berry) DAMN. I'm totally gone on'im. He-he. Oh-fucking-well. XP
Aww...he almost told him! SO CUTE. LERVE. I'm SO proud of my sweet, SWEET li'l pocket pet! (blushin' again) I was like 'sqeeze a little harder, it'll come out' but then he started to bleed and I was like 'Fuck. well maybe you're sqeezin' a little too hard for now'. (ruffles his hair)
DAMN! Is Tory actin' jealous or what! Aww...he secretly lerves my pocket pet. He-he. YUMY :P (blushin') Sky better watch out. Tory doesn't seem the type to take 'no' for an answer at ALL.
| MyNameIsTaken chapter 14 . 8/16/2007
Well...She changed...And she knew? YAY! I hope he tells! I don't like Sky..SKY NO GOOD! TORY 4EVA.