Reviews for Now and Forever in Secret
Esquirella chapter 14 . 8/16/2007
BOTHOF THEM ARE OUT? OH NO! That can't be good. At least his mom was honest with him for a change.
unbound chapter 12 . 8/16/2007
OM-fucking-G! (lookin' like some idiot dumped beet juice all over me and really needin' my boyfriend! SHIT!) My adorably, naughty little pocket pet! Jayden's so MINE...well, AND Tory's of course...coz I want Jayden to be happy. (still blushin') Yah. I'M the one who's sick.

Poor Sky. It's tragic really. His happiness is doomed...even if he is Mr. Moneybags. Jayden's heart will always belong to another...if it's true sib love that is. He-he. Which I find SO YUMMY :P (and blushin' again)

Please give me more...
Amerez chapter 14 . 8/16/2007
hi! FP's being stupid again and not sending me my alerts...I loved the new chapters, so much is going on. His mom must be so drugged out to sound so nice.
Esquirella chapter 13 . 8/16/2007
Is Tory also not telling Jayden something?
Oxaloacetate chapter 12 . 8/16/2007
Yay another chappy!Also yay for the lemon!(or lime or whatever.)I think it's sweet how Jayden wants to help 's being kind of unfair to poor Jayden though.
Esquirella chapter 12 . 8/16/2007
OMG! That bitch will get away with the money? I don't mind Jayden dating Skyler, though. I still like that guy.
Stellar Wolfe chapter 11 . 8/16/2007
WOW. This is GREAT! _;; I wasn't going to read this at first but I'm glad that I did. I like how you have it in his point of view and then have his thoughts. Kudos D. Also, The Red Jumpsuit Apparatus is my favorite band so you get five brownie points. XD UPDATE SOON!
Esquirella chapter 11 . 8/16/2007
I was happy with that Skylar stuff then Tory had to go and get a girl pregnant, bringing down the mood.
Oxaloacetate chapter 11 . 8/16/2007
Aw Jayden's thinking about Skyler.I still hope he and his brother will end up for an update.
Initially loaded chapter 11 . 8/16/2007
Fuckidy Fuck Fuck, Tory got a girl pregnant? and Jayden got his first kiss? well...
unbound chapter 11 . 8/16/2007
lol SO knew this was coming! My naive little pocket pet is bi. (ravages him with kisses...then he slaps me away. Tory came in the room) lol You've got my imagination running wild! ;P

Does Jayden not have a one and only anymore? :( I mean the title IS 'Now and Forever In Secret'.

Cannot wait for more...
Esquirella chapter 10 . 8/15/2007
What that's about is this guy wants Jayden, right?
unbound chapter 10 . 8/15/2007
(laughs evily) Hah-ha-hah! Jayden's walkin' right into this. I knew he wasn't gay...yet. Hopelessly in love with his sib, but not gay. Otherwise he'd know why the guy blushed. My silly, naive little pocket pet...

Man, I don't know why him lusting after Tory turns me on so much...SHIT! I cannot believe I just typed that! (blushin'...I've got to stop that word vomit somehow) Okay well, I did lerve the way he talked to Val. lol

Is he gonna cut his hair? He's been saying that he wants to.

Amerez chapter 10 . 8/15/2007
heh, I reviewed last chapter and then I looked down and bam there's another chapter. The plot thickens I see. Oh, and you'd better not do anything to that pretty hair!
unbound chapter 9 . 8/15/2007
Blue! Blue, blue, blue! Or purple. Purple would be better. It's stormy...goes with his personality.

Dude I could listen to Jayden's thoughts on life forever. lol I laughed SO HARD at his response to Parent Fucker :P

(spanks pocket pet) WTF? WHY on EARTH would he want to see his mother so much? At this point, I don't believe he loves himself.

Glad Hawk Nose is gone but also glad she got him to start journaling.

Give me more...
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