|Reviews for Now and Forever in Secret|
| Amerez chapter 9 . 8/15/2007
I don't think he should dye his hair. I like the pale blond shade...but that's just me. I see you've been busy writing. yay. oh, and childhood's one word not two.
| unbound chapter 8 . 8/15/2007
Aww...this story can make me feel the fuzzies sometimes. Like at the beginning of this chapter. Dude their affection for eachother is yummy. Tory's rackin' up points BIG time.
Holy shit! That's a LOT of changes in one chapter! You delivered it so smoothly too. It didn't feel like you were just trying to get on with the story. Nice job.
Man, have I said how much I LOVE Jayden's attitude? The way he talked to the therapist was awesome! lol I can't even BELIEVE how svexy that makes him to me. (blushin') He-he ;P
| unbound chapter 7 . 8/15/2007
I first have to say that I *HATE* Shane. WTF? He's the sick one if you ask me (which you haven't but I'm opinionated) My sweet, sweet Jayden. (tears) NO! I hate that he was so hurt! *coughcastrate'imcough* Then he can spend the rest of his days desiring with NO HOPE of satisfaction ;) (yah that's right...not death- TORTURE.)
OMG! I just wanna cover Jayden up with a REALLY soft blanket and pet his hair.
Have to read more!
| unbound chapter 6 . 8/15/2007
Okay, I have GOT to get this out. There IS an area that Jayden makes me wanna strangle him in...that's his relationship with his mom. (growls...INWARDLY- jeez, I'm not THAT much of a freak) I hate how she uses him! But what I LOATHE is that he allows it- welcomes it even! This is where I would spank my beloved pocket pet. (yes that is how I think of Jayden.)
Tory's earning points in my book with how protective he is of Jayden. And to be honest, it's entirely obvious that his 'protectiveness' is a bit 'out of balance' if you know what I mean. Not that I think he's gay either. Again, just in love with his sibling. Which is MAD SWEET if you ask me! It makes me wanna put BOTH of them in my pocket.
Still wanting more...
| unbound chapter 5 . 8/15/2007
"Were sort of alike...Well except for me liking my brother." lol I totally lerve that line! Your schpeal about Victor was hilarious. lol
I think one of the reasons I luv this story so much is that Jayden feels more just in love w/ his sibling and not necessarily 'gay'. Like I totally don't see him going for any other guy EVER...JUST Tory. Not that he would go for a girl...though he's twisted enough to maybe. I really just see one for him and that's his protective older sibling who HAPPENS to be a guy. It's just sweeter to me that he has a 'one and only'. (blushin')
Wanting more...(still blushin'...shit WHY do I keep typing that?)
| unbound chapter 4 . 8/15/2007
Dude! Tattoos and piercings on guys are MAD SWEET! And both brothers have them? Okay. Maybe Tory's not TOO bad...
I think Jayden's a riot! His 'How Many Things Are Fake About Angela' list is great. lol I LERVED what he said about her ass being fake ;P
Oh! And for the record, some of my least favored people on this planet we live on are Martha Stewart and Paris Hilton (blaugh)
Jayden is SO not a chicken! He actually kissed his brother! I'm STILL so impressed by that. (blushin')
I'm looking forward to more P
| unbound chapter 3 . 8/15/2007
Aww...wow. I'm acutally really impressed! Jayden's got some nerve to be able to kiss Tory like that! If I had a brother that I was in love with (slumps) which I don't even have a brother, I would never have the nerve to do that!
Okay, so now I'm totally crushing on Jayden. Sad I know. So who's sicker? The sick fuck or the one who crushes on him? Yah. Oh well. You just write him to be so delicious.
I'm really want to read more now.
| Oxaloacetate chapter 10 . 8/15/2007
Great chappy!Can't wait for the next I'm wondering if Skyler likes Jayden or something?
| Initially loaded chapter 9 . 8/15/2007
Pink! dye his hair pink...nah, joking, i hate pink. Loved the update. Yay no more demented theropist, arh god, i hate them. little fuckers. Loved the chapter.
| Esquirella chapter 9 . 8/15/2007
Why would she have Jayden committed? She's a weird therapist!
| Initially loaded chapter 8 . 8/15/2007
he is some fucked up kid...and i love him! I love his attatude (SP?).
| Esquirella chapter 8 . 8/15/2007
NOW the father figures out something's not right? After all of these years? He couldn't put the pieces together? It took something like this to happen? Not much of a parent.
| Esquirella chapter 7 . 8/15/2007
I'm stamping my foot and glaring at you right now.
| DRAGONFIRE04 chapter 6 . 8/15/2007
PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I LIKE YOUR STORY.
| Esquirella chapter 6 . 8/15/2007
Oh no! Does Tory get there in time?