that's not fair! you can't stop it there!

no Jayden don't go! I'm really warming up to this story...

Oh no! Shane probably said that to get Jayden to come home, didn't he?

Uh oh! If Tory's not dumb about the injuries, what else isn't he dumb about?

heh, I love that snarky attitude of his. Keep up the good work!

Gah! Shane sounds really icky!

Still liking it. Question, how old is Jayden? cuz if his older brother's six or seventeen...how much younger is he? Anything under 15 is just really creepy for me...even if in your mind he's younger, tell me fifteen so I don't freak, ok?

Ha. this is cool. Jayden's got a very... charasmatic... personality... yeah let's go with charasmatic. Anyways,you've got my interest, I'll keep reading.

Aww...that is MAD SWEET! Tory's his hero. Makes me wanna ruffle Jayden's hair and put him in my pocket. He's ADORABLE! Tory and I wouldn't get along well. Yep! I'm the girl he would hate. I surely wouldn't fawn over him and would most likely shatter that monumental ego of his.

I luv Jayden. (insert tears) I hate what he goes thru. If I were Jayden, I would've killed Shane and made look like a perfectly believable accident by now...or at LEAST found a way to render him wheelchair bound for the remainder of his days. I've been in a similar situation and the guys knee caps were completely knocked off with a bat. (not by me, I said, 'found a way') Hah! And I can say that coz you don't know who I am.

Well whatever. I'm bored now. And if I'm boring myself you're probably asleep.

I still want to read more.

I luv his attitude! His bluntness gives a bite to his personality (in a "when life gives you lemons...pull out the salt and the tequila" kinda way)

I like him. I want to read more.

nice. write more please! i really do like the story so don't stop.

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PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I like this story.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I like to see what will next.

Let's see some more.