When my friend recommended reading this fic I was a bit unsure, but with just the prologue I can't wait to get into this one! xD

Heck it could turn into a rip of of Jurassic park, and I'd still read it. Drew me in with those blunt words, great work.

I'm looking forward to reading this one to the end.

Lol I spent an absurd amount of time reading this;I think from maybe 10 or 11pm until 3:45am /exactly/. That's a long time for me...I blame it on the fact that I'm using the family computer and I was actually supposed to get OFF the computer at 11 or 12. :) THIS STORY WAS SO WORTH THE RULE BREAKING! I loved it; I truly did. Actually, I found the sequel on someone's favorites and though, "Interesting, but I'll have to read the original first."

Obviously I don't have the time to read the sequel right now...I really need to sleep. xD (I helped my friend move yesterday and I'm helping again later this morning. My arms, back, and legs can't take it, I tell you!)

I'm completely rambling 'cuz I'm tired. Sorry. All you really need to know is I'll be haunting the sequel, probably tomorrow. :D Great job!

~AftG

that was one cute story :) i liked it :)

EXCELLENT STORY!

he sure talks to himself ALOT

oh noes! its the pedo!

im in love. emotionaltears* poor jay sexual abuse is no laughing matter. his mum sounds like a royal cow.

oh my goodness. ur stories have all the things i like in them. HEIL THE ANGST!

AWE ! that was an amazing story :D thank you SO much for writting it :D your awesome :) i woulnd't have changed a thing ! it was great ! i was so happy that u told us that tory had liked jayden a lot longer than he did :P CUTE

Awesome story...I completely love it!

I must admit that story was twisted but I loved it. I am glad it all worked out in the end! *Sigh* Though I have a question; Did Amber ever end up with anyone?

This story looks promising, and so I press on-wards!

I'm loving your story so far. I haven't read everything yet but I thought to review anyways. I feel bad for Jayden even if he wouldn't want anyone to.

I just read the prologue to your story and a little bit into chapter two. I was wondering if any of this is true?

You covered a lot of information really well in a hard pitiless sort of way that really set the tone of story and revealed the conditions of the main character's life. It would have been easy to have gotten "drug down" in all this, but it really was a good beginning.

I thought I would stop and ask you if you actually lived through all this...the kids life up to this point was appalling. One wonders how he went through all this. And why he didn't tell someone to try and get out of the situation...but then I realized why. He was alone and knew no one cared. There was no one to turn to.

Wow... I kinda suspected that Skylar was cheating with Kasey! And I was surprised that Jayden told him about his feelings for Tory! :O