Reviews for Horrorscape
A Droplet of Rain chapter 13 . 10/29/2008
yay another update after quite a while. :DD thanks! The story is getting more and more intense. I wonder what would have happened if James told GM that he loved Val...would he have killed him immediately...?

Anyway, keep updating and writing!1
UnfitForSociety chapter 13 . 10/29/2008
Gosh, it's getting pretty intense. Well, of course, it's supposed to I guess but whatever. Anyway, great chapter. How many chapters are there in here.
Demeterr chapter 13 . 10/28/2008
O... suicide chess... neat. I look forward to the next chapter. Although.. maybe it's just my horrible english but the line "He didn't even have to say it this couldn't kick." ... well it sounds a little bit strange? Maybe it's just me. This chapter was nice anyway.
I Quoth Nevermore chapter 13 . 10/28/2008
Insanity. Literally, I die. Last line? So dramatic. Amazingness. I love this. Only there were a few quotation problems, but I'm assuming that's FP's fault. Great chapter. Update soon!
SeraiRhifune chapter 13 . 10/28/2008




Well, finally, the truth is known. About freaking time. ;-)

Sorry, I'm just intensely drawn-in when I read this.

Excellent chapter! This was better than I expected...and I have very high expectations of this story! I love how I have to think to keep up with it, instead of it being a mindless love story. This is complicated, heated, seductive...dark.

I love it!

I most humbly await your next update with guarded diligence! ( it soon!)

I remain your loyal reader,

Serai Rhifune
heart.angel chapter 13 . 10/28/2008


That last line..

EEK! Wow...that was brilliant. o.o I NEED MORE. Seriously. Whats going to happen to James? Was he really lying about loving Val? And what about Val? Ohh! Suspense!

I cannot wait.

Update soon and amazing chapter!

. .
VelvetyCheerio chapter 13 . 10/28/2008
Wow. The wait for this chapter was worth it. I was leaning so close to the screen just to absorb it all. Wow. So, was James fed to the sharks? Why didn't we get to see any of that action? I can wait for the next chapter, but it's going to be hard. Especially with the way you ended this chapter. So many questions, so little time. Hehe.

NattieLove chapter 13 . 10/28/2008
creepy yet really really good. cant wait to read more!
The Teller of Stories chapter 13 . 10/28/2008
Great chapter. Loved it! sent shivers down my spine, GM is so..sinister...he is insane! He always was! the only thing I could suggest changing would be that you have some things in () and I wasn't sure if those were thoughts to be hones they look like they were your personal notes that you thought you would have to ilaberate on what was in them. Still good chapter!

-Keep Dreaming

-The Teller of Stories
Nyleve Nalloc chapter 13 . 10/28/2008
This chapter was good! Lots of things happening. It's like, I'm a ghost in the house watching everything... creepy. I really like how Val reacted at the end chapter. This precise fire is what GM saw in her and what made her even more appealing to him, I'm sure.

I can hardly wait for more!
october lies chapter 13 . 10/28/2008
ah! i'm so glad that you updated!

this chapter has me on edge. i can't wait to find out what happens next!
codyismypup chapter 1 . 10/28/2008
I don't know, I wish you wrote Val from first POV, but I'm glad you didn't as well. I've always liked first POV because then I get to know the main character better, and I don't feel like I know Val very well. But however, first POV tends to cut you off from the other characters, leaving the reader only with the views of the mc. So, I guess your preference is more suited.

Hum...all I could think about when the teacher pulled him back was 'soon, but not now'. As the reason for why he didn't fight the teacher.

Nice build of suspense and intrigue. I love the little chess definitions in the beginning.
MyGame chapter 4 . 10/25/2008
Anyone finding this review that happens to be playing the game.

This story is the answer.
UnfitForSociety chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
Hi! I found out about your story from another author. And when she mentioned your book in her story, I was like 'that sounds like an interesting story. I wonder if it exists' And I get to the end of the chapter and find it. I was surprised and kinda glad I guess. Well I like your story.
Crys chapter 12 . 10/18/2008
Wow! Great! I just could not stop reading, this story is so addictive) Can't wait for next chapters. I hope you'll update soon.
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