hello,

since i have read your story and loved it can you do me the itsy bitsy favor of reading my first ever, baby story I Am Brandy Williams

thank you,

Amber

wow i cannot believe it whats gonna happen

i like this chapter its really cool but what does star-crossed mean?

Very good chapter! I'm hooked.

yay! i'm caught up! finally. rewrite YAY!

how many chapters do you plan to make this one?

update when possible.

wow, another great chapter. this story is so intersting and suspenseful, it's just really, really good. i'm dying to know what's going to happen. update really soon please.

Fabby chapter. I love the descriptions you write. Amazing. Well, update soon!

Lazy me no sign in.

I LOVE IT.

The additions are fantastic. I like Val even more in this chapter than any other. Setting the physical attraction between her and GM is precisely what this first installment needed.

And James' character feels much improved too.

Very good.

I is happy.

HeHeHe...foolish James! Shouldv'e never spoke back! I liked it! You always do a good job! ]

I have always really loved the horrorscape story and have read it since you originally posted the third chapter. However, I believe in the rewrite, this chapter should not have been posted just yet. It takes away the mystery from GM, as you would assume the mysterious boy sending her letters was this guy. It humanizes the "glacial" boy too early on.

The first proper story that has potential to make it to the big screens on . Great work. Keep it up.

This story has me on the edge of my seat :D

wow i just stumbled upon this fic...at first, it didnt seem like the usual stuff i read (fluff and bittersweet romances) but im really glad i read it~~

goshh. && i really wanna know what happens in the penalty round...!

*waiting for next update*

keep it up and update soon

i'm really excited to see what the penalty is. update soon please!