This is the last chapter, right? I can't wait for the sequel! GM will reappear right? He's my favorite character...for some odd reason.

Well, I've been reading this from the beginning, bur never reviewed because I usually only review stories if they honestly need help to make them better. But, I've decided that this story doesn't need any help just praise because it's one of the BEST stories on here. And I absolutely LOVE it. Hope you update soon!

Holy freaking cow. You got me to hold my breath.

And honestly, I rarely do that. You're amazing.

I've been looking for a good horror/romance story for a while.

Thank God I found yours. Honestly, it's absolutely amazing.

This story really got me on edge and I'm excited.

Great job on the story, and I can't wait for the next update.

-k.

Oh my god... That was... scary. I like I'm going to have nightmares.

Wonderful story though. I love the characters and I even love GM.

AHH GM! and i kinda liked him too haha...update soon i cant wait to see what happens!

Im hooked! Please update soon :33

Gah, I'm getting increasing in love with GM. His sick ways are so amazingly great . . . Phantom of the Opera type of thing.

I have no major issues, but when you finish this story, I will gladly go back and help you edit. I've been unhelpful so far, and thus, I feel bad. So, keep writing.

Oh, exciting, exciting!

This Story rocks! It's really good! I know this sounds kind of crazy, but i dont want GM to go to jail! He's not going to get arrested is he? Is Valerian going to live? Where did blake and lisa go? WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN?

I didn't review the last chapter but the one I'm reading now certainly provided quite a shock. I'm guessing Blake and Lisa got out alive but isn't it true that Gavin would have liked to see them dead, if just to get revenge for high school rivalries? He definitely didn't let James out alive. Sometimes I really wish I had more backstory on Gavin. I want to know what made him this way. The police are coming. I seriously wonder about that. Is he going to get caught? Is he going to escape? You can't deny that Mecozzi is quite brilliant. I doubt Gavin and Valerian will ever be happy with each other now, especially Valerian. He's leaving her to drown, after all. I don't quite understand why he would want her to die, after spending so much time attempting to get her. Of course, despite Gavin's brilliance, he is very, very twisted. Who will save her? will she even BE saved? "His hand left her stomach, as he traced a final half-circle around her navel before lowering his arm to his side and regarding her with a curious blend of emotions — scorn, amusement, and something else, which she couldn't identify — until another one of his poker faces covered it all up neatly, like a mask." What are all the emotions about? Though I think that the sense of confusion I'm getting can't compare to Valerian's. I feel bad for Valerian and everyone else. Even GM. I love how Valerian is slightly attracted to Gavin. Anyway, amazing chapter. I spent a lot of time speculating possibilities, didn't I?

AHH! I read the whole thing up to here and this is where you chose to end it! Well, you didn't end it, but this is all there is at the moment. I think GM is awesome, what with his creepy gorgeousness. Scary guys are amazing, so I definitely approve of him. Yum. This whole story is wonderfully twisted and suspenseful, which I love, and I can't wait for the next update! Will Val drown or won't she? I think GM's going to jump in and save her when the cops show up, and they'll be like "Oh, he's a great rescuer!" but it'll just be washing the evidence off him and making him look good, but I'm probably wrong. He's so diabolical. I adore him. So can't wait for the next chapter to find out what happens!

ah! why are you SO amazing?

bec

p.s. update soon or I'll send GM after you.

oh great. now she's gonna drown.

but of course someone is going to save her. will it be blake? lisa? Gavin? or someone else? hmm my bets on lisa.

update when possible.

ahh so cool you have seriously got to do another chapter as soon as possible please please please

no!don't stop writing i want to read more!