OMG

AH

happy ending for them?

will she be able to forgive him

and like it dosnt seem like he is really the GM

is there some one else pulling the strings?

gah im goin insane!

lolz

OMG!

This story is like so exciting..

Anyway, I think GM had officially creep me out!

He opted for a really sinister way to get a girl..

I think I rather kill myself than subdue to his conditions.

YAYAYAYAYAYAYAY! She is with the bad dude! *dances* DOO DOO DOO! *sets a cookie aside for you with 'update' written on it* Enjoy your cookie! :) And love to you! and your IMAGINATION! LOVE AND COOKIES FOR AL! :) :) :)

I love this story. Its like a shinny penny!

DUDE! OHMIGOD OHMIGOD OH MY GOD! Blake can't kill Lisa; he's not ruthless enough. What exactly are GM's requirements of total commitment? I'll admit, dying is the worst way to go but James sort of had it coming. I'd maybe just kick his ass, but that doesn't seem GM's style. DUDE! The only thing better than reading your stories at home with the room locked is reading at school with no one to bother me. xD I can't wait until next time!

Awesome, darling. Absolutely awesome.

~ .Whimsy

AH!

*girly squeal* This chapter was so amazing! AH!

Okay, update soon. :)

whoop whoop!

its not exactly what i was expecting, it was a

whole lot better!

wow. well i hope you write fast!

*gasp*

Wow.

*drool*

There is something extremly captivating about your story. *twitch* It is so...intense. energizing. pumping. amazing. adrenaline-ness. WOW. I hate and LOVE cliffhangers at the same time! I love them because it makes me CRAVING for more, and I just feel like I need the next chapter here and NOW. But I hate them, especially on websites like this, and WIP's, cuz now I have to WAIT. AH! I think i'm in shock. Well, I knew she'd say yes.. Val's not THAT heartless... GAH! *sigh* I need more. Honestly, I think I will go into withdrawal when this is finished. Seriously. Withdrawal symptoms to the max. Yikes. *hyperventilating* GM is such a prick, but so seductive at the same time. Honestly, what woman doesn't want a little bit of mischief in a relationship? (although in this case, it's MORE than a bit of mischief...)I don't know what i would do in Val's situation. Seriously.

...

Honestly, I think I would say yes. Something evil inside me just is turned on at the thought of being held against your will by a slightly evil hot guy. Lol. Sometimes nice guys are just too nice. All I can say is, this is amazing. You have to keep going, forever and ever, or else many people reading this will go into a coma. Seriously. Actually just kidding, I have more to say.

Awesome work. I can tell you seriously have some skills up in that cranium of your's. I wish I could write as well as you. Honestly, I can draw, but not really write. Well, I can write, but i have shallow idea's for stories...

Now I feel like a fish gasping for air. Need...More...Horrorscape...

Thank you. You are on my list of greatest authors.

Right up there.

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AH! WOOT WOOT love it heehee its so cool aboslutly fantastic...is it coming to an end or some thing?

I loved the chapter. However, now that it all seems to be coming to an end, i really hope that you don't just make the conclusion cliche by having everyone killed off or val escape easily. Instead, i think that the other two should kill each other off so that her swearing herself to him proves pointless (but its too late to change her mind, you know? added frustration...). Then, you should go on to describe what happens after that. For instance, what exactly does swearing herself to him forever mean? I think that would make for some interesting chapters. love your writing! and these are just suggestions btw. you don't have to pay any attention to them if you don't like!

Great Chapter! Can't wait for the next one! Update Soon! Thanks!

You. did. not. leave. it. there. !.

I am reading on my cell and it is too late to type all I want to praise... but if you don't update ASAP I will go GM on your ass.

I love him by the way.

I would've chosen the Phantom and Jareth any day. I am twisted that way.

Grr was hoping to see a lot of action happening in this chapter, and instead you keep us in suspense, whilst giving us backstory. Now we're in even more suspense, and have to wait for the next chapter to find out what happens! Also, is GM really going to keep Val, or is this just all a revenge plot where he eventually kills her off?

LOL wow, what a psychotic loveboy. Hehe...it was selfless of her to give in, but I say she should stab him in his sleep. Or put poison in his toothpaste. That'll be more unsuspecting. Hope Lisa and Blake don't try to kill each other in the mean time though.

O..Cliffhanger..please update soon...love your story...