Gah, what a mess. Hahaha. Great chapter, even though it makes me want more! Which is a good thing, but a bad thing too when there's no more left to read! hahaa. Keep it up and update soon!

Faith

Can I say wow, really? "There's a nice reflection of the door in your eyes,"

I love that line. ahh. great fantastico

its getting good...update soon!

por blake! i hope he doesn't die. he sems so brave compared to the rest of them. val's the sorta person that really cares bout her friends. all i can hope for is that the remaining white pieces stay alive.

I love this story! I especially love all the scenes between GM and Val. And the best/creepiest line was “There's a very nice reflection of the door in your eyes.” Oh man. He's like an 'all-knowing' type of guy. I can't wait for the next update. Make it soon please!

Jason is right. that's why I'm going to talk when I'm about to die. it always works (at least in books and films :P). and how did he have a knife in his pocket? the reflection in Val's eyes was a great idea :D earlier today I was thinking about how much I love to see things that aren't in my view by reflections. this chapter was fantastic, I love it.

Awesome chapter, as always. Do you envision someone as GM? IE, a celebrity? I always think of Tom Sturrdige since I saw him in a movie where he's very intelligent and slightly...questionable in his obsession with death and playing mind games. Anywayy have a super day!

Well, that was sort of a cliffy. I mean, we didn't get to see what questions will be asked. Brilliant job! How old IS GM? And how on earth did you think of this plot? It's awesome. Anyways, please update soon!

i wasnt a big fan of james but i was still hoping she would save him. update soon this is really getting good

awsome great story

update soon

I love you. oodles...but not in a creepy way like GM, like I'm not gonna go after your friends and stab them or anything.

Can't wait for the next one!

I love the great character twists but I still think Lisa is a piece of work. I thought her and Val were friends but she's so concerned about herself.

by the way, do you have character pics? I'd really love to see how you picture GM and Val to look physically.

:P

love it..please update soon

darn it. i wanted to push the next chapter button. \

i'll be honest with you. i can't believe i've fallen in love with this story.

i never thought i would. horror really isn't my genre. (

anywho...

good job mate! you've earned a faithful reader. keep up the good work.

This is scary to be honest, but gud! i can't believe that there has been TWO deaths already. I nevere really liked James to be honest, so i'm sorta glad that he died since he seemed like he 'cheated' on Val. It's just a bit weird that GM seems evil and nice at the same time? Anyways, how often do u update? coz i really want another update soon!