This is rather interesting, but it reminds me a lot of Interrogame by either Hate To Hope or Bleeding Air, I don't know which name it's under, but it's by the same person.

Of course, the characters are different, and the situations...but it seriously is a lot alike.

If you haven't been told about this, then I suggest you check it out.

But moving on, poor Val...all she wanted to party, and then her boyfriend is killed.

I'm guessing that Val rejected GM because he wasn't good looking, and that picture of the guy she found was him.

I find it ironic that Charlie and them are dressed in white considering their personalities being more...morbid than what white is percieved at. You know, white is thought as pure and good.

I'm guessing the next to die is Blake.

Update soon, I really am dying to know what the question is!

-RAR

Total cliffhanger. I'm in love. Well lust. With the psychopathic GM of course :). But a question about the suicide chess idea, is the idea for the team to kill all their own pieces or all the other team's pieces? Like all white kills white and all black kills black?

ERGH! You are horrible, almost as horrible as me. downright evil. What a cliffy. You better update, or i will feed you cookies until you weigh 10 pounds. so UPDATE...or else...COOKIES!

That sounds kinda dangerous considering what he could ask her. Two down now. GM really didn't lose her did he? Probably not considering he showed up right on time. Are you going to reveal how old GM is? Because now I'm interested! It also seems as if Val's friends are turning on her. One more question, did someone move James or was he killed outside, because I could of swore that he was in a pitch black room... Well anyway, great chapter! Can't wait for you to continue.

(Sheesh thats a choppy paragraph...)

Gah! What a good job, I swear I'm on the edge of my seat everytime I read this. Great work, I love where this is going! Keep it up and update soon!

Faith

o! I don't really remember the last chapter. I remeber the main points, but no details, so I really have no comments. Update soon! Happy New Year!

You have no idea how happy I was when you updated. LoL. I can't believe you killed James-well, it's all for the good of the plot. Brilliant job. I can't wait to see how this all ends up! Update soon!

Ah, this is my favorite story on Fictionpress. It's just so well written. This is the story I check like...every day to see if it's updated. It's brilliant! _ Oh, and regarding the Zodiac...yeah...he was a psycho, but a brilliant individual... but mostly a psycho. and a pedophile. ANYWAY la dee da, Can't wait for numbah ten!

Oo, the suspense is rising. I'm not sure if I like GM or respect him in an odd way...

(And when I said Val cheating I meant in the game. But either way I do believe that there -would- be mass-murder.)

Thank you for updating!

Holy shit. That really sucks for James.

Intense, I think this is one of the most interesting stories I've read in a long while! And I certainly didn't expect to find one in the Romance section. Awesome chapter to an awesome story! Can't wait for the next one!

you should really try to get this story published. it's brilliant. beyond brilliant. oh my fucking god this is fucking amazing. ah, PLEASE update soon! you are...amazing! ah. it's so creepy and SO entertaining! and the plot is SO well planned out and the characters are...god! I don't even know what else to say. except that I hate you and am insanely jealous of your talent. :)

bec

omg! i need an update! you can't stop there! is he seriously dead? omg! write faster! you can't do this to me!

on a more serious note, GM may be evil, but i like him.

I don't know what this says about me but ... I really like the psychotic GM. Poor guy, can't they see all he wants is a little love. )

I don't like Jason. God, I was just waiting for Lisa to hit him real hard or something.

GM's getting creepier and creepier.

And that message on the wall. I would be so scared. I bet James died. That stupid kid that wouldn't let him down. Then again, I'm probably way off the mark. Lol.

James died! yay haha. I like Blake. yeah. I've never been to keen on chess, but this story makes me want to play :D