Oh wow, this story seems way too interesting to stop. I really hope you continue it because I'm wondering about GM and all the ambiguity of it all. Great story. :)

i love it so far!

wow i cant wait

awesome

I cant wait for more!it sounds pretty interesting and im hooked

This is very interesting, I don't know why but it's unlike alot of storys, well except for the hunt and prey thing only your doing it a little differently

I really like this so far. It's going on my favorites and yay for you! ah. I want to know how to play chess now

Chapter two and three went by so quickly. I need more.

GM sounds like a pretty 'decent' guy. Haha. Just the amount of knowledge he holds, and the way he upholds himself is so magnetic.

Perhaps, Val would be better off with GM then James. Only because it seems as if they are together just because they are really close friends. Or not. My mind is working overload.

Love it!

I love the name of this chapterr; actually, I love this chapter itself.

The idea of the story reminded me of another book, though the name escapes me at the moment.

So, I'm off the read the next few chapters. Can't wait until you update again.

OMG. This is possibly the most enthralling storyline I've read in...a LONG time. :D I love it, beyond words. Please update ASAP!

This is amazingly awesome. Seriously, I am addicted. Just had to drop a review before I hit the next chapter. This is uberfab.

Ugh, my computer was being dumb. I'm reviewing for chapters 1-3. I dunno why I couldn't do 3... It said someone already reviewed for that chapter on my computer which is weird because no one else goes on it...

Well, anyway. I really like the intellect in this story even though I had to look up some of the words in a dictionary. You put a lot of thought into this story. I love the name, Valerian, I didn't know there was a flower named that. GM sounds really really interesting and I really enjoyed reading this story so far so hurry and update so I can read some more. See ya!

~Moonlit Promise

ps- If there are three whites and three blacks then what does GM's white shirt mean? He's a fourth so it's uneven. Just wondering.

Also, there is a typo, chapter 4 after the second... Uh... "-" that thing. lol You spelled 'black' as 'back'. Just thought I'd tell ya.

What a creepy game! If I were Val, I'd be more than freaked out. Lol.

Great chapter!

And?

*Shivers*

I wouldn't want to be in Val's position right now. Want to know what sets your story apart? Well, its the dark aura around it, and GM's personality is very intriguing, as is this story's personality. You gave me the feeling and image of wandering around in places you know is forbidden, and if you get caught, well... the consequences are not nice... but its good, I like it ]