Reviews for Horrorscape
SuperCUTEJensen chapter 2 . 8/15/2007
awesome chapter.,..cant wait for more...pls update soon
BR chapter 2 . 8/15/2007

I'm loving the sinister aura around the story. It's giving me chills thinking about it, and the mystery is very intriguing. Hm... its all set up as a game of chess isn't it? She's in black, and so are her friends, and he and his friends are in white. ]

White makes the first move... so I wonder if the party was the first move. lol

Can't wait for more.
Alice B. Black chapter 2 . 8/15/2007
Love the story! I get this feeling like this GM guy is going to go crazy and kill everyone! Well I can't wait for the next chapter!

Faith Adeline chapter 2 . 8/15/2007
Ah, he's so weird. Hahaha. Seriously, he gives me the creeps (Gm) But, this chapter was awesome. It's like. . .A chess party hahaha. Keep up the amazing work and update soon!

romancereader chapter 2 . 8/15/2007
Wow...! There are no words to describe this! :-). It is amazing and I can't wait to read more. It already has me creeped out (but in a good I really want to read this way)! Please update soon:-).
SOLFA.sin chapter 2 . 8/15/2007
This is quite impressive thus far. I look forward to reading more.
icedfaerie chapter 2 . 8/15/2007
Great story! I love the plot and the characters..definitely can't wait until the next chapter...this GM guy kinda creeps me out, but I suppose that's the way you want him to be, right? I really want to see where you'll go with this, because it intrigues me. While I was reading it, I was totally on edge, not knowing what would happen next..keep it up!
Wannabewizard chapter 2 . 8/15/2007
Gm stands for Grand master. nad the black and white is chess pieces
almighty arie chapter 2 . 8/15/2007
I love the story so far. Well written, not to mention GM's personality is well constructed. You're doing well with capturing that sort of spine tingling effect with him. At least, if that's what you're working towards.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Lilly Wattenberg chapter 2 . 8/15/2007
I like it, very interesting. How come she hasn't put together that the Grandmaster is also GM? I also wonder why you made James so...i can't find the words but he seems somewhat dull. And Lisa i have to say i don't really like her. Oh, one more question in the next xhapter will we find out why some people are in white and the others in black? Does it go along with the chess theme?

Please keep up the good work, Lilly
insane in the brain chapter 1 . 8/14/2007
I love it. All of it. The intrigue and the mysterious sinister ending of this chapter, it's amazing.
Faith Adeline chapter 1 . 8/13/2007
wow, freaky. haha. I like the beginning, it's very good and pulled me in. Can't wait for more so update asap!

mole-san chapter 1 . 8/13/2007
wow, very...whats the word? creepy in a good way. You are very good at describing her name and its origin. He's a little possesive wouldnt you think? I mean, If I knew there was someone like that stalking me, i would lock all my doors and windows XD. The letter was so realistic 0_o, it was almost as if i was reading the real thing.


p.s This is a very suspenseful story, you must update.
SuperCUTEJensen chapter 1 . 8/13/2007
interesting start/...I like it...cant wait for more..hope you update soon
pop-yur-fcukn-collar chapter 1 . 8/13/2007
Wow. You're an amazing writer. Great introduction. I like the characters. I like every thing about this and its only the first chapter!

Can't wait for more!
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