Reviews for Horrorscape |
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![]() ![]() ![]() awesome chapter.,..cant wait for more...pls update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() O.o I'm loving the sinister aura around the story. It's giving me chills thinking about it, and the mystery is very intriguing. Hm... its all set up as a game of chess isn't it? She's in black, and so are her friends, and he and his friends are in white. ] White makes the first move... so I wonder if the party was the first move. lol Can't wait for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the story! I get this feeling like this GM guy is going to go crazy and kill everyone! Well I can't wait for the next chapter! ~Alice |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, he's so weird. Hahaha. Seriously, he gives me the creeps (Gm) But, this chapter was awesome. It's like. . .A chess party hahaha. Keep up the amazing work and update soon! Faith |
![]() ![]() Wow...! There are no words to describe this! :-). It is amazing and I can't wait to read more. It already has me creeped out (but in a good I really want to read this way)! Please update soon:-). |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is quite impressive thus far. I look forward to reading more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! I love the plot and the characters..definitely can't wait until the next chapter...this GM guy kinda creeps me out, but I suppose that's the way you want him to be, right? I really want to see where you'll go with this, because it intrigues me. While I was reading it, I was totally on edge, not knowing what would happen next..keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gm stands for Grand master. nad the black and white is chess pieces |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the story so far. Well written, not to mention GM's personality is well constructed. You're doing well with capturing that sort of spine tingling effect with him. At least, if that's what you're working towards. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it, very interesting. How come she hasn't put together that the Grandmaster is also GM? I also wonder why you made James so...i can't find the words but he seems somewhat dull. And Lisa i have to say i don't really like her. Oh, one more question in the next xhapter will we find out why some people are in white and the others in black? Does it go along with the chess theme? Please keep up the good work, Lilly |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it. All of it. The intrigue and the mysterious sinister ending of this chapter, it's amazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, freaky. haha. I like the beginning, it's very good and pulled me in. Can't wait for more so update asap! Faith |
![]() ![]() wow, very...whats the word? creepy in a good way. You are very good at describing her name and its origin. He's a little possesive wouldnt you think? I mean, If I knew there was someone like that stalking me, i would lock all my doors and windows XD. The letter was so realistic 0_o, it was almost as if i was reading the real thing. -mole-san p.s This is a very suspenseful story, you must update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting start/...I like it...cant wait for more..hope you update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. You're an amazing writer. Great introduction. I like the characters. I like every thing about this and its only the first chapter! Can't wait for more! |