Reviews for Folklore
enchantingfuzziness chapter 1 . 3/27/2009
The poem has some really nice moments - the line "Crying Acid. Bleeding silence." gives me some strong mental images.. and the rhythm in some places makes it really appealing to read.. but sadly -for me- the poem loses its appeal after /the septic gullet/ line. And you might have overdone it with all the different fonts and things.. not to mention that shocking is all great and fuzzy.. but being a bit more subtle often does the job better. I love the title though. :P