|Reviews for Hidden Truth|
| Vigilant chapter 1 . 10/12/2007
Interesting realization that most people perhaps see, but often don't care enough to acknowledge.
| fairytale failure chapter 1 . 9/1/2007
I love love love the first two stanzas here, and I think they would make a great song too. I don't really understand what you mean by 'caresses everyone of / her curves', maybe I'm not reading it right but that doesn't make sense to me. I love 'vanity adores her', I think its so cool when people personify intangible things..
But 'web of lies?' I think you could do better than that. The rhyme isn't really apparent there, anyway. (Maybe you can hear it better in song?)
| whispered something profound chapter 1 . 8/14/2007
I want to hear this song!
| Queen of Dragonnor chapter 1 . 8/13/2007
It's very nice in a sad and angsty sort of way (bringing out the emotions). Good job on this. :)