Reviews for Finding Perfection
Guest chapter 1 . 12/12/2014
Hey that was really good.i like simon.i wish i had a bf like one u know i were crying in the middle of it.
Remi chapter 1 . 1/31/2014
Sampy but tasty. A little bit bittersweet in Laurie's case, but it's nice to see their relationship work and their issues to dissolve...
lostlamb chapter 1 . 6/14/2013
Awwww poor Laurie. Why can't she accepted their sexiness. I love Simon and Jason together. Beautiful couple.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
Cool. Just cool. I liked it. I like Simon. I like Simon & Jason together in this one. I can't bring myself to read the one about Skye. It just seemed like Skye & Jason were gonna be together. Anyway, I like Simon. Good read.
ShadowJunkie chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
Graham deserves better. Graham deserves so much better. Throw him Michael for all I care, just dear lord, don't tell me he permanently ends up with Laurie! I wanted to strangle the godd mn b tch. Burn her in hell and cast curses on the little prick.

Uh, maybe I shoulda warned you that when I hate something, I never hate it halfheartedly. Friend says I hate the things I hate with passion. Whoops.

Although I could see where Laurie's at. I went through the same situation with a friend of mine. She started liking her best friend who loved her for a year, and, well, I didn't really approve. It's hard to think the love was real when it all happened so suddenly (seriously, one day she was obsessed with our senior and the next she was crying and saying she loved her best friend. hard to believe) But unlike Laurie, I still try my best to support them. I just say, go man! Stay with the one you love. Hell, the couple have enough problems with our other friends who also doesn't want them to be together. Might as well give them my support and all. If they stay together, then great, they stay together. If they break up, then I'll just silently tell myself 'I saw that comin'

And have I told you how I love Jason's one tracked mind? I don't think so, so, yeah, I'm telling you now. I love Jason's one track mind! Haha, it's very entertaining, and I'm happy that did not change after they became together, 'cause you know, some people just change drastically because of love it's ridiculous.

Also loved it when Simon started calling Jase 'Baby.' I hear a voice, and the voice's hot. Simon's hot.

Kyle's cameo had surprisingly been cool as well. As in, I immediately liked the dude. Wish he had more screen time because he looked like a fun character. Just like Graham. And I still say Graham deserves better...

Well, all-in-all, you're still awesome, and exactly an hour has passed since I last reviewed your story so I think I better sleep. You've gotta write more stories! Give us a heads up if you do.
R. Ficst chapter 1 . 2/17/2013
Very nice sequel. I do hope Laurie comes around eventually. I'm glad Jason and Simon are doing so well together. I like what you've chosen to go into and what you've chosen to leave open. And I adore Graham : )
GrangerDanger333 chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
This is really good too!
Laurie is seriously ANNOYING, and I realised its funny how all their guy friends are calm and accepting and help them out and really nice. And then, the two girls (excluding Skye's sisters...) are completely volatile and angry at the boys all the time :)
The only not-so-good thing about this story is the way their parents are completely okay with them being stepbrothers and dating. I would expect some kind of weirdness about that fact, even if they are totally cool with them being gay. Doesn't stop the story being brilliant though :)
Katie chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
Muaha! Oooo how I love these boys! I'd love to hear something from Michael, he seems interesting. The quiet ones are always good :)
heyitsstupidme chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
Yeah, it was very sappy, but I really liked the one-shot and it seems Jason has grown up since he started dating Simon.
L'aurore chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
Like this piece better than Skye...
anydayanywhere chapter 1 . 4/12/2012
Great follow up to the story. I like how the story is in Simon's point of view, it really gives the readers different perspectives. :D
heavensentskysky chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
L0ved it!thx for the awesome epilogue...good luck on future work :)(:
xfffxfxfx chapter 1 . 1/9/2012
This was alright. I enjoyed seeing what happened after the end of the other story, but I think that might be the only reason this story exists – in order to satisfy curiosity. I’ll check out your new original story, it looks like it has promise.
Raaawr Ima Dinosaur chapter 1 . 11/4/2011
This was a great one-shot and I totally loved it! Can't say that I really like Laurie though /

I like how you placed two different issues into this instead of focusing on one, although, now that we know his mum's reaction, I'm pretty curious to know Jason's dad's reaction now. Great job! :D
foreveran chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
very nice and complete ending :)
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