Reviews for The Photo Album
Sanareth chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
Perhaps:

"To start their new life together... He gazed back at the house appreciatively. Perhaps, he thought, they should take a photo to commemorate the moment.

After all, he concluded on the way to the tip to dump the old albums, memories like this are important. Treasured.

Perhaps something like that, however sad or sentimental stories are not my strong point so i can't really make any specific suggestions.

Nice work either way.
Needa S chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
You have a few spelling errors but other then that it was a well done. Sad though. Keep up the great work. Thanks for the kind review.
HiddenFromYou chapter 1 . 10/3/2008
That's so sad. A couple of typos but other than that it's great.