Reviews for Mirror
ForeverBehindTheImpression chapter 1 . 3/5/2009
Great stuff :) If you wana put full stops and commas in, go ahead!
Anonymous chapter 1 . 6/3/2008
Nice poem!

The only thing is your punctuation. My English class just did a little lesson on poetry. The end of every line does not need a comma or period or semi-colon or whatever. Your excessive use of commas chops up thoughts and ruins the flow of the poem. See, commas and dashes (-) mean to pause, while semi-colons, colons, periods, exclamation points, and question marks mean to stop. If you're unsure, just look up a classic poet, like Maya Angelou or Emily Dickinson.

Keep writing!
ZombieMcQueen chapter 1 . 8/16/2007
a great poem. the wording was like a literary form of liquid awesome, if that makes any sense