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relapse into change chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
this is beautiful and makes my heart ache just a (little) bit

it's so powerful and i love it, really
by His blood chapter 1 . 9/12/2007
You come to me with your scars on your wrist

You tell me this will be the last night you're feeling like this

"I just came to say goodbye

I didn't want you to see me cry, I'm fine"

But I know it's a lie

Chorus:

This is the last night you'll spend alone

Look me in the eyes so I know you know

I'm everywhere you want me to be

The last night you'll spend alone

I'll wrap you in my arms and I won't let go

I'm everything you need me to be

Your parents say everything is your fault

But they don't know you like I know you they don't know you at all

"I'm so sick of when they say

It's just a phase, you'll be o.k. you're fine"

But I know it's a lie

This is the last night you'll spend alone

Look me in the eyes so I know you know

I'm everywhere you want me to be

The last night you'll spend alone

I'll wrap you in my arms and I won't let go

I'm everything you need me to be

The last night away from me

Bridge:

The night is so long when everything's wrong

If you give me your hand

I will help you hold on

Tonight

Tonight

Chorus

Altro:

I won't let you say goodbye

And I'll be your reason why

The last night away from me

Away from me

-

Even if I say, "It'll be alright,"

Still I hear you say you want to end your life.

Now and again we try to just stay alive.

Maybe we'll turn it all around 'cause it's not too late.

It's never too late.

Maybe we'll turn it all around 'cause it's not too late.

It's never too late.

(It's never too late.)

It's not too late.

It's never too late.

-three days grace

-

these songs are for you.

iloveyou. please hold on. i know you can. you're one of the strongest people i've ever met. i need you. i need your writing. you are so beautiful ... i just wish you believed me.

stay strong.

love,

alison
HauntedMisery chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
Wow, all of your pieces are so beautiful, and this is no exception.

"you are just another reminder of why

i can’t be perfect"

Love it.

Great job!
Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 8/14/2007
Wow, this is a powerful piece. I can't relate to having scars and people remind us of things we don't want to remember when we are trying so hard to just get by.

Keep it up.
this is britt chapter 1 . 8/14/2007
beautiful but really full of such bright-burning pain. i hope things get better for you- genuine hurt radiating from it, but you portrayed a fragile subject so vividly so kudos.